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This isn't really a first part but more of an intro enjoy-
All these things have taken our world. We now live in a small city below the traveler safe from them. What lays out there is unknown but not for long. Stories of time traveling robots and giant creatures with tanks and spider type things have been reported by military leaders but that is it.
Now me, you may ask what have I anything to do with this. Well as you may know people have become guardians and I am one of those. Coming from a military family I have been taught in the art of war. New to battle I don't have much experience but many leaders have said I am good at what I do. Now what is that you ask...
Well me and my team of snipers have been training for the 117th regiment and we hopefully will get in. Zari, an exo hunteress who is tough but gentle fills the first slot in my team. Tommy, a human warlock is the comedy of the group and he keeps spirits high. Me, Ryder an awoken hunter who keeps his cool all the time and is the leader. Oh and our last pick up was in the city a robot named Phoenix who is amazing with a sniper and an engineer.
Getting into the regiment was our main goal we have been training for years and are one of the top sniper teams outside of the military. We got called into a meeting to see if we made it. Of course the military personnel didn't want there identity's to be revealed so they wore hoods.
"Congratulations you all have made it but some of you past actions shan't be repeated" one of them said. Now yes one time, one time we killed a cabal captain without orders and everyone knows about it. So now we wait for our first mission as part of the 117th...
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No offense, but you really need to work on your writing. Punctuation, grammar, word choice, sentence structure.