originally posted in:The Black Garden
Ok, I managed to fix some problems, so consider this the FINAL draft of part one. This is my first post under The Black Garden, so let me know what you think. If you feel its good enough, I'll finish it.
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Man this is too weird, here's what you've got to do. step 1) read the first two parts of my fanfic. (they're both on the group forum) step 2) see the similarity? (It's a big one) step 3) possible collaboration?
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great story loved how it actually felt like a beginning rather than just jumping into this persons life
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this is really good. Do you have a time frame for part two?