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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by Narstrom:
4/24/2013 11:20:24 AM
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Better Days Gone
The Story of Najah Al' Belushi and the strength she found to countinue liveing in the warmth of the Traveller.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mK8RlFp53hSHvpQxcvjciXwGvFJwb4MWYX39eCr8OM8/edit
Edit: I am open to collaberations as my story goes.
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Added a new part, sorry for the hiatus :)
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Oooh, suspense! Like I do!
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3 RepliesCould do with some polish, a lot of corrections are needed on various grammar and spelling errors and some re-structuring to make the prose less stilted would be a good idea. Good premise though.
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2 RepliesUpdateing again, I'd really like to see some critisism
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Updateing once more :)
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updateing again
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done for tonight. enjoy all
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4 Repliesupdateing again
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Done writeing for the night, hope you enjoy!
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2 Repliesanother excellent segment to the story =) I just want to keep reading it. It has captured my attention over and over again.
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Updated once more! Thank you wonderful readers :))))))))
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I update this every day, so keep checking back! And Astante, Thank you all
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Fantastic story. You've definitely put a lot of thought into it. Great job! I hope I can see more soon.
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1 Replyit really is an excellent piece of work =) you are a fantastic writer.
