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originally posted in:The Black Garden
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Edited by Ocean Man:
4/24/2013 12:02:38 AM
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My First Short Story.
My character's intro. It was a fun process. Hope you like it. Please put down any criticism, I'll be open and it'll help me improve.
Thanks to DarkBandit for editing it.
If you want to try writing some fan fic, join The Black Garden.
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3 Repliesits alright for a first go but you can add so much more detail to it. Flush it out a bit more. Add more of what your character is thinking.
