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Edited by Ocean Man:
4/24/2013 12:02:38 AM
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My First Short Story.
My character's intro. It was a fun process. Hope you like it. Please put down any criticism, I'll be open and it'll help me improve.
Thanks to DarkBandit for editing it.
If you want to try writing some fan fic, join The Black Garden.
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1 ReplyJust two small pet peeves i would suggest. 1. You can come up with a better name then Holoroom. maybe use an acronym (H.A.L.L. Room "Holographic Augmented Life Lesson" room 2. we all shouted yeah. That is a phine (why did i think fine was spelled with a ph) word, but i do not think it encompeses the complete and utter joy that should be shown at the moment this is my two cents
