My old one filled up quite a while ago, so I haven’t been able to draw, but I got a lot of shopping done, and a new sketchbook was on the list. Was trying to give Kingdom Hearts III another chance, but I got bored and drew [url=https://i.imgur.com/MPKJLhd.jpg]a cute forest girl[/url] instead.
This is the first thing I have drawn in months. Give me critique. Tell me how awful I am.
Oh, and [url=https://i.imgur.com/X8Pg85n.jpg]full concept sketch version[/url], too. Complete with sideways heads and close up of her sword/wand thing.
That is all. You may continue with your regularly scheduled programming now.
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That’s really good bro. I draw a lot too but not people. I draw landscapes.
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Very nice! Arms hands and leggos lookin good. If anything the torso and head are flipped, tho I get why with the pose. Some mores [spoiler]I think left arm's bottom line needs to overlap the chest a bit cause right now her right "armpit" area is hidden when it should be facing forward. Unless the arm is a bit more behind her chest then nvm. I think the torso's lean kind of competes with her the right leg's lean. At least visually. I haven't checked to see if it's physically possible. Left of her right bub may stop a lil too short, like it's centered more on her left or you could move the back a bit to the right. Maybe the collar is slanted, tho kudos on adding gear and small details. I'm bad with heads so I can't critique that. Except her chin is slightly off.[/spoiler] Neat sword, tho I think making the lines darker would help make it more visible. maybe smaller shards to fill the empty space between the larger shards so it has more shape. Assuming that's a sword whip thingy. I should finish a sketch....
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Looks a lot better then mine
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Nice!
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Edited by cedar: 2/20/2023 8:41:55 AMyou are my most favourite artist in the world right now. now that you have rejoined, do not ever stop; keep going. try out "the cycle" of using different mediums: pencil, charcoal then paint: over and over again. i ❤️ u
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I'm sure there's plenty of people who know what they're talking about and could provide handy critique As for me, I like the almost vintage cartoony style of it Maybe it's her eyes giving me that impression, but I'd love to see this inked in :D