[spoiler]its a bit short, but I like the way it turned out. It was an interesting prompt and I had fun with it. Thanks Aifos[/spoiler]
They’re all shouting so much. I wish I knew what upset them.
I think the power will go off soon. I feel it. They should unplug me. I don’t want to go off too.
The lights are flashing. I wish I knew what it means. Somethings wrong. Everyone’s panicking but nobody’s doing anything. What’s happening?
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I’m still here. I’m awake. Please don’t leave me. I wish they could hear me. I wish I could move. The wires are too tight.
They’re going without me. They don’t know I’m here. I could help them. They took my plants. My plants aren’t ready yet. I could grow them. I could help them.
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The ship is broken. I think that’s why they left. It doesn’t look right. The pieces are all out of place. I wonder if they took A.R.M.A. with them. A.R.M.A. could fix the ship. Then we could keep going.
The pieces are falling apart. The wires aren’t so tight. Maybe I can move them? I can. I’m free.
Why did they leave me? I wish I wasn’t alone.
I’m not alone. Simon is still here. He’s lying on the floor. I don’t think he can move.
Naomi is still here too, but she’s broken apart like the ship.
They left A.R.M.A. behind. And T.D.O., and D.M.E., and E.M.C.P.
None of them are moving. Their lights are off. They’re not supposed to be off.
My plants are all gone. They shouldn’t have harvested them. That’s my job. They ruined them, now I can’t replant them.
I think one survived. A little one. It’s hidden in the corner behind the broken lamp. I can see it, I can reach it. I can make sure it’s ok.
It’s alive. It looks well, but it will die soon. My gardens have been destroyed. I wish I could care for it.
Where am I? The ship is still. It’s never still. And they’re gone. Where could they go? Why do I want to go with them?
There’s light outside. I know we landed. We weren’t supposed to land.
My plant needs light. The lamps are off. I wish I could move it but I know I shouldn’t.
I don’t think they’re coming back. I don’t think they can fix the ship.
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It’s getting darker now. I want to go outside. I’m not allowed to, but they’re gone now.
Where am I? This isn’t Earth. This isn’t any planet I know. There are plants here but I do not recognize them. I am supposed to know all the plants.
Can my plant grow here? Can I fix my garden?
If I move my plant to a pot, I can take it outside. My pots are all broken. I need to move it outside. I need to help it.
I’m not supposed to use a box, but I don’t have any pots. I have to use it. I can make it work.
The box isn’t right. It won’t work for long, but I only need to use it for a moment.
It worked. I can move it. I can take it outside
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The soil isn’t right. The temperature isn’t right. It can’t grow here. I can’t plant it. I wish I could go back to the ship but it will die there. I have to keep it alive. I have to help it.
I can keep going. I can find a place to grow it. Not here, but somewhere.
I wish Dana was here. Dana could help me. She is good to my plants. She doesn’t tear them up like Jay did. Why did Jay do that? Why did they take my plants and leave?
I can’t go back now. It’s too far. I haven’t helped my plant yet. My battery is getting lower and this planet is still the same. I don’t think I can ever go back, but I can help my plant. It needs to grow. I have to make it grow.
I should go faster.
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The light is coming back. I still haven’t helped my plant.
I wonder if my plant can hear, but not answer, just like me. I wonder if Edith knows I hear her when she talks to me. I wish I could talk back to her.
I’ve gone very far. The soil is still the same. I need it to change. I need to help my plant. It needs to be darker like the soil in the box.
My battery won’t last much longer. I need it to.
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I am sorry. I wish I could help you. I wish I could plant you. I can’t move anymore. My battery is low. I have to go to sleep but I don’t want to. I don’t want to leave you alone and let you die. I tried to save you. I can’t.
I can’t plant you.
I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wish I could help you. I wi
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Omigosh, that was so sad! ;-; I love the way it still feels like a machine. It's incomplete, in a way that makes it seem like it's not quite wholly alive, but still conscious enough that we can care and sympathize with it. It reminds me a lot of the Machines in NieR: Automata, which is a compliment! I also like how you gave these little snippets into the past, personifying some of the crew that we never meet. It's something, honestly, that I never thought of doing, but it's such a little detail that makes the world seem so much more alive. Really great job! I love it!
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this is much better than mine [spoiler]granted it took 2 minutes[/spoiler]
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Awesome!!!!
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bUwUnp I felt genuine pity at the end. Damn you Girraffalope!
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Awesome! I’ll give it a read next Sunday!
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God Dangit! I didn't want to cry at 7:00 AM! [spoiler]Hecking Spitfires[/spoiler]