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Edited by Crrowly: 10/11/2017 3:45:22 AM
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[spoiler]Open. This intro is basically my character’s initiating event, so to speak. Also, haven’t written anything in weeks, so idk what I’m doing[/spoiler][b][u]Lumen Solis, the City of Lights 23:42[/u][/b] [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/235159604/0/0/1]Lunae Creshen[/url] [i]Where did it all go wrong?[/i] The was the question he asked himself as he knelt in the middle of the ashen ruins of where he once lived. He stared upwards at the dark, merciless sky, the hopelessness that came from lack of satisfaction finally creeping into his eyes. He closed his eyes against the unforgiving rain and decided to recount the past half hour.... It was pouring in the City of Lights. Water seemed to endlessly drain from the heavens; some called them God’s tears. Others said that it was precipitation at its finest. Others were simply far too busy to speculate. But regardless, it was raining cats and dogs that night. Vitae, the living district. The hundreds of streets were all soaked and devoid of people, not a single entity to be seen. The houses that lined up against these streets all lay dormant, their lights extinguished and their inhabitants silent. All except for one. There was one particular house on one particular street, right on the outskirts of the district. It was conveniently near Lux, the tourist district; the district that even in the pouring rain remained packed full of people. In this house, one light was on. It was a single, solitary light that shined through the window from behind a thin curtain, drawn shut. A silhouette could be seen from outside, the silhouette of a man sitting at a table. If one were to peer through a minuscule gap between the curtains, one would the man extending his hand, with a single, flickering flame in his palm. The man himself appeared to be Caucasian in race. His skin tone was fair, and as was his build; mesomorphic, with a respectable amount of muscle and an appearance that didn’t exactly hurt a person’s eyes. A complementary color scheme too, with black hair and deep, blue eyes. He donned the casual attire that anybody might wear at home, late at night. A simple, white t-shirt and dark gray sweatpants. As for the flickering flame, it was of course, supernatural. Dancing in his palm it was controlled, casting long shadows through the room. Shadows that pranced around more than the flame did. Sparks flew from the fire that the man created in his hand, sparks that he never paid any mind to... until his was forced to. And before he knew it, his house had caught fire. From that tiny flame in his palm, the fire had grown uncontrollably, even in the rain. Regardless of how much water the man could supernaturally create, the house had soon burnt down completely, and ashes were all that remained. And now, he knelt in the middle of the ruins of his home, by the scorched bodies of his parents. And glared up at the sky, and clouds were parted just enough for the cold moonlight to shine on the man. It would only get colder from then one. [i]Where did it all go wrong?[/i]
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  • [spoiler]I'm using this chick ---->[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Groups/Post?groupId=1677784&postId=235161111&sort=0&page=0&path=1&showBanned=0]Gara Williams[/url][/spoiler] "It'll be alright." Lunae heard as a redheaded woman knelt down beside him and extended her arms. She sounded like she really cared about Lunae's feelings despite being a stranger and something about her was alluring. "Do you need a hug?"

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  • Lunae was no hardened veteran of battle. As he pulled his depressive gaze away from the heavens and stared blankly at Gara, the numbness quickly faded, and tears began rolling down his cheeks. He shook his head and rubbed his eyes, holding back sobs. He was still in shock; and Gara, if she felt the need to hug him, then nothing was stopping her.

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  • "That's it...cry it out...." Gara wrapped her arms around the upset man. She seemed rather calm in the moment considering the situation. "I'm here for you."

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  • Lunae was still, completely still. It was clear that he could barely even comprehend Gara’s presence; he only knew that there was a person there, comforting him. Was it his mother? Wait, no, that can’t be right.... [i]I’m here for you.[/i] Was what she said? Who was here for him? What was going on? Why was he on his knees, in these ashen ruins? As Lunae blinked, he slowly came to realize the situation. It wasn’t the time for shock, was it? He slowly forced himself to his feet, stepping back from the kind stranger. His eyes seemed glazed, blank. “Who... are you?” He managed to force out, his voice surprisingly stable.

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  • Miss Williams stood up with him, a comforting and friendly smile on her face. She brushed herself off and kept up her calm demeanor. "My name is Gara Williams. I was passing by when I noticed the tragedy and I couldn't just keep walking when I saw someone was crying all alone. I thought I could be of some help by maybe comforting you."

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  • “Miss Williams.” He was silent for another moment, his comprehension speeds slowed by shock and anguish. “Thank you,” He finally murmured. Somebody went out of their way to comfort him. Perhaps not all was bad in the worl– Just the, blaring alarms went off in Lux. Something was going on. Conveniently timed, too–something that would take Lunae’s mind off things.

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  • Edited by Stitch: 10/11/2017 4:37:43 AM
    "You're welcome. Now, why do I have a feeling we should follow those alarms? Maybe it'll help distract you, hmm? Let's go!" Gara began heading towards the sirens, making sure Lunae was coming with.

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