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originally posted in: THE DOJO
8/27/2017 1:04:08 AM
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The explosion was bright, and the flash coated the room like a sheet of white. As it subsided, the throne room was burnt, cracked, and wrecked. Pillars lay collapsed on the floor, pieces of the ceiling had crumbled down. As Zane stood in the centre, the destruction like a painting around him, he could feel his raspy breath cut against the back of his throat, whether it was from Tywin or simply him exhausting himself it didn't matter. Tywin lay on the crumbled throne, moving slightly. He let out a groan as the stone was crushed around him and his head was held up against what remained of the seat to look at Zane. His face was cut, burnt and coated in blood. His chest was burnt and his outfit was charred. He squeezed his hands weakly as he limply turned his head to Zane. "You....you....you aren't...capable. Or defeating me...you...worm...." he barely made out in his cocky gruffness.
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  • He let out a heavy breath, sucking in fresh air as he walked over to Tywin. He moved slowly, his last attack almost drained him completely and he felt tired. "Just.....shut up already you egotistical psychopath....."

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  • "Heh. Death does not pull any strings on me you varmint. You are a pathetic creation devised by your cultist parents and powers you do not even comprehend until this day. What do you even know of what you are capable of, hmm?" Tywin provoked Zane.

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  • "Well....." He outstretched his hand and used the last of his aura to pick Tywin up and lock him at place. He forced him down on his knees as he stood in front of him, the Infinite blade in hand. "I don't, and I really don't care." He places his free hand in Tywin's shoulder and thrusted the blade into his chest, leaning forward and whispering into his ear. "What I do know....is that this is for everyone you killed. Falk...Anne....And Alex....Burn in hell you bastard." He twisted the blade around before kicking Tywin's dying body to the floor.

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  • He let out a [i]gurk![/i] as his body limply fell to the floor in front of Zane. His head smacked across the ground as a rushing pool of blood already began to form out from his body. The crimson liquid looked like wine as it spread out around Tywin, seeping into the cracks of the palace. And at that moment, it was quiet. All Zane could hear was the wind of the mountains beating up against the castle he stood in. It was over.

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  • He let out a heavy sigh, for his mission was finally complete. He had avenged his fallen friends, and freed the land from Tywin. Now all that was left was to go home and tell everyone at the dojo the news. He sheathed the infinite blade in his back, and began to walk out of the room.

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  • Then, he felt a tremble underneath his feet. It was short, but then it happened again at an increased force. As he looked around, he saw that the tremble now made the walls vibrate, and he almost struggled to stand as the third one hit like a miniature earthquake.

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  • "God damn, what the hell is going on now?" He said as he braced himself using the Greatsword.

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  • The castle continued to shake, and the ceiling began to crumble. As Zane looked up, he saw massive pieces of debris falling right towards him.

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  • He leapt out the way of the falling rocks, and started to run out of the castle.

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  • As he did however, and as the throne room door to the outside got nearer, suddenly white flames coated the door. Zane felt their heat as he slid and fell before he could reach the door, and as he looked around he continued to feel the shaking of the castle. Suddenly, a massive-white tail like limb shot through the side of the throne rooms wall and thwacked Zane back, sending him sliding back across the floor. Another one bashed through the right side of the throne room, then two more popped up on both sides. The castle continued to shake now and it no longer was stopping.

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  • Edited by Inflatablepants: 8/29/2017 12:47:09 AM
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  • He managed to stop himself from hitting the wall and looked at the white tailed creature. He was extremely drained, and was unsure if he could call upon any more power. "What the hell are you....?"

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  • As he stood now at the back of the throne room, he saw Tywin's corpse light into a white fire. This fire began to grow and grow, until it became a massive orb that was the size of the room its self and was massive in its radius.

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  • "You've got to be shitting me...." He was completely drained, but some of his aura still lingered from his last attack. He drew it back into him and re entered his ultimate form. It would tax and push his body to the limits, but it would allow him to fight.

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  • Edited by Inflatablepants: 8/29/2017 1:45:56 AM
    As the flame began to coat up the walls, and then began to dim, beams of white light shot out from the top and bolted towards the throne room door, seeping through it like water. Then, the flames completely diminished, [spoiler]https://youtube.com/watch?v=vosU7EdnK3M[/spoiler] Then, the massive creature was revealed. Zane could only see its back in that moment, but the beast was enormous. Its head nearly touched the top of the ceiling, and its large horns on each side of its head twirled into demon like points that made the beast look even taller. Its body was white, but gave off a black smokey essence. It was slouched forward, which pronounced its naked backs protruding spine which was bony and wretched. It however revealed no skin, because said skin was covered in white fur. Its legs were straight, but when Zane looked closer he saw that they were also bent slightly in the knees like a canine. The beast had massively broad shoulders but they too looked bony in their complexion. The beast wore a fur trimmed cloth around its waste which covered its lower regions but left the side of the legs exposed. Out of this cloth, a long dragon like tail extended itself, and lit on fire It raised its bent-scaling yet fur coated arms to its sides, up like it was praising a god. In its right hand, light particles seemed to start to spot around it. Then they began to take shape. And In his hand a massive sword formed, the size of half the beasts body. The blade was as terrifyingly unique, as its hilt was jagged and sharp and spikes seemed to slip between the beasts fingers. Its pommel was a spike, simple yet it sent shivers down Zane's neck. The blade however was the most interesting part. It was double edge, but the middle of the blade was empty and the blade had no tip. Rather, the blade had two tips that took the sides of two individual blades that connected to the curved and jagged stone like guard. Both blades were double edged, however, and both formed and arrow head like tip shape at the top of their individual blades. The beast then turned. Every step made the castle shake as it did so. As it turned, Zane saw the massive gash on its fur coated chest, which glowed with a bright blood red light. Then, the creature aimed its head towards him. It was the head of a wolf. But it's eyes were that of a lizards, no, a dragons. The horns protruded out of the sides of its pointed ears and its white fur face was skinny and grotesque. It snarled its teeth, which formed into a grin. With that, it bellowed our gruffly, but also as if his voice was being projected through a grand theatre. [i]"Hyahahahaha!"[/i] the beast let out. [i]"You incompetent fool, thinking that simple powers and blades could defeat the almighty Tywin! I knew that if I were to be bested in battle again, certain...assurances, would have to be made. And here I am! A TRUE GOD AMONG MEN![/i] The beast, now revealed to be Tywin announced. [i]"You...your power...it easily surpasses that of the oh so great "Fierce Deity." Its a shame you could never truly grasp its ability with your random spurts of anger! BUT IT WILL NOT MATTER NOW. I HAVE UNLOCKED THE POWER OF MY BLOOD, MY SOUL. A POWER SO GREAT AND DIVINE THAT THOSE WHO GRANT YOU YOUR OWN POWER WILL FEAR...ME! NOW! I WILL END YOU AND YOUR SILLY LITTLE DOJO! I WILL EAT WHAT REMAINS OF YOUR FAMILY! I WILL ACHIEVE A HIGHER-!"[/i]

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  • Edited by Zane the 3rd: 8/29/2017 1:48:55 AM
    Then while the beast was talking, he took out the Magnus and shot at this fûcker. He was really tired of hearing this dudes voice, and probably lost a few brain cells from all the bullshit Tywin spat. "I'm so tired of evil monologs...."

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  • The bullet [i]pinged![/i] off the side of the beasts skull. He did not flinch as it did so, rather it blinked slowly in disbelief. [i]"....You must die."[/i] Tywin then said as he swung his arm straight into Zane, sending him flying to the side and crashing into the hard concrete wall of the back of the castle.

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  • His aura managed to protect him from most of the impact, and he chuckled as he got back up. "What's the matter, did I strike a nerve?"

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  • Zane's wit was met with a massive sword,which slashed into his chest and sent him to the opposite side of the throne room. His aura nearly shattered with this colossal strike and he felt as if one of his ribs was turned to power. [i]"enough of your pathetic remarks. It is time for you to die!"[/i]

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  • He managed to hide his pain as he chuckled at Tywin. "You know how many times I've heard that? Is it even possible for you to be original?"

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  • Before Zane could get up, the wolf like beast grabbed his legs with his free hand. He held Zane's limbs with a death tight grip then swung the man over his head and smashed him into the ground the side of the throne room door. [i]"How many times will you flail around like a fish?!"[/i] Tywin rebutted.

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  • He hopped back up, a bit slower then before but still acted like he couldn't feel the damage. He just needed a bit more time. "Really? You really just called me a fish.....that was the worst insult I've ever heard."

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  • Tywin resulted into a bellowing cry of annoyance and anger as he sent his foot up in the air, and then crashing down on Zane. The step seemed to completely crush Zane's chest, and he couldn't breath as all of the air in him was knocked out of his throat like a bike pump.

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  • His chest felt like it was about to burst, and he was seconds away from death. However this was the opening he was looking for, and he grabbed onto the massive paw of Tywin. "Hey buddy....thanks for holding that extra power for me!" He drained his aura that Tywin has stollen from him and became filled with strength, which allowed him to throw the giant wolf off of him. "Maybe next time don't be so hasty to drain power you don't understand."

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  • The creature stumbled back as he hardly left the ground. He stabbed his blade into the ground which halted his stumbled. The blade cleaved through the concrete, and three massive orbs of fire shot out of his blade and towards Zane in random and Zig-Zaggy directions.

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