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originally posted in:The New Dojo
7/6/2017 2:47:12 AM
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[quote][b]Just as quick as he had taken the goblin's life, he caught the weapon in his hand[/b]
"You think you can beat me that easily?"[/quote]
The orc's jaw dropped.
[spoiler]I haven't been cleared yet.[/spoiler]
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Edited by Wheatley: 7/12/2017 3:49:47 AM[spoiler]Scratch that. Mortal form is still alive. Your completely -blam!-ing with my lore system. He really is the vessel for the Void itself. It's not a mere being.[/spoiler] "How?"
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[quote][spoiler]Scratch that. Mortal form is still alive. Your completely -blam!-ing with my lore system. He really is the vessel for the Void itself. It's not a mere being.[/spoiler] "How?"[/quote] [spoiler]Oh. I apologize. Honestly, this is the best I could come up with for good/decent writing/plot. The stuff in your bio I find equivalent to the problem with Superman writing mechanics. It's seems too OP. What makes characters interesting are weaknesses. Not plot devices, but actual weaknesses and limitations, and how the character gets around them. I say this in the spirit of encouraging criticism of my own experience. This is the most challenging obstacle I could think of for your character I could think of, according to your bio.[/spoiler] The goblin materialized and held out its hand. "Follow me."
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[b]And then he did[/b]
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Edited by Wheatley: 7/12/2017 5:25:37 AM[spoiler]Yeah. I do like that idea. Since he is a tool for the Void, we may be able to take advantage of that. Say we sever his connection to the darkness, or maybe even somehow kill him/make him change his ways. That'll give me an excuse to start my new plot. On second thought, I don't really want to give up my character and his current level of power. Any advice?[/spoiler] [b]He did so[/b]
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[spoiler]To fight?[/spoiler]
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[quote][spoiler]To fight?[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]Yeah[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Well that sucks. Any way you can get quickly approved? I want to murder some Orcs.[/spoiler]
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[quote][spoiler]Well that sucks. Any way you can get quickly approved? I want to murder some Orcs.[/spoiler][/quote] [spoiler]It must take its due course. The main course has not yet been touched. Only the appetizer has barely been meddled with. [/spoiler] [spoiler]You do know you have a Balrog you may have to contend with?[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Yep. It'll be nice to have a new challenge...[/spoiler] [spoiler]Since he is a psychotic dimension hopper who's wiped out entire realities looking for a challenge... [/spoiler]
