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originally posted in:The New Dojo
6/30/2017 8:45:16 PM
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[i]Redemption, Part 1[/i]
[i]As the sun rise over the horizon, a small girl wept in the forest as she gazed upon her dead mother. She sobbed for hours until a hooded figure approached the girl.[/i]
"Child... what has happened?"
[i]She continued to weep as she backed away from the figure.[/i]
"What is your name, child?"
[i]The girl finally spoke up.[/i]
"E-Evelyn..."
[i]The figure drew in a deep breath.[/i]
"My name is Korsis, Evelyn. Could you tell me what happened?"
[i]The girl gazed at her mother before falling into broken sobs.[/i]
"Evelyn, you will be alright."
[i]Korsis kneeled next to the girl.[/i]
[spoiler]Open. Depending on the replies I get and what happens, my plot will revolve around it. Wise decisions, lads.[/spoiler]
English
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A quaint pitter patter could be heard from the bushes nearby. Nothing sounding too large or fast was approaching. A brief two seconds later, followed by the sound slowing down significantly, a winded Quincy stumbled out of a nearby cluster of rose bushes. He was dressed in his usual whiteout clothes, his bleach-white jacket, sweatpants, boots, and scarf. He took a moment to catch his breath before speaking. "What happened here? I heard crying from the gates and ran here to find ou-..." He stopped when he saw the girl and her mother, silencing himself. "Oh.." he said, kneeling slowly in regard.
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Korsis turned to Quincy and struggled to contain his disgust. "What are [i]you[/i] doing here?"
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"Coming to see what the fuss was all about. Now I know and am morally obligated to help." he replies, completely missing the strained tone, answering as if there was no hostility in it.
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Korsis stood up and picked up the girl, cradling her in his arms. "Arrange a funeral, Quincy. All an animal is good for..." He spat on him before turning to carry the girl out of the forest, softly whispering to her.
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Quincy wiped off the spit, sighing softly as he looked over the dead mother. "Yeah..right...Now what happened here.." he said to himself as he knelt by the corpse, planning on investgating a little first, possibly taking notes for later. He got out a small notepad as he looked for the cause of death.
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"She was shot, Quincy, can you not see that?" Korsis had stopped a few feet away and had set Evelyn down by a tree. "You can clearly see the entry and exit wound, and I was able to see the blood splatter. Maybe you're not even good for menial tasks like this. Maybe..." He turned to him and grinned devilishly. "You don't [i]deserve[/i] to even perform such tasks, hm?" I'm an instant, Korsis had ignited one of his sabers and had dashed toward him, releasing a flurry of swipes and slashes.
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Quincy just swiped his hand and froze Korsis in place. It wouldn't kill him, or stop him for long, but it did stop his stupid voice from being heard. "Welp, you're a wonderful little ray of sunshine, arnt'cha?" Q quipped sarcastically as he staggered to get up, the act of freezing Korsis having tired him. "Not sure if you got the memo but you can't exactly go around murdering people like your buddy Ian." Q said as he scampered off into the woods before the ice broke, panting as his heart rate struggled to steady.
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Edited by Hal0T1nman: 7/2/2017 12:18:37 PM[spoiler]ok that's -blam!-ing bullshit[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]But a life draining sith maniac isnt? [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Freezing a character totally to prevent an attack and escape? Yeah, uh, I think that's bullshit. [/spoiler] [spoiler]And my Sith Lord is a [i]Sith Lord [/i]. 'Nuff said.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Well he isnt DEAD, just frozen in place temporarily. Its relatively thin ice, which I should have mentioned before.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Relative my ass.[/spoiler] The ice shattered mere moments after whatever sorcery was cast upon Korsis. Instead of chasing after him, he turned back to Evelyn. As he knelt next to her, a cry of rage was heard as a pack of mercenaries charged him. He easily cut them down in a matter of moments. Evelyn watched in horror as Korsis slaughtered the men and women. "Come with me. More will be here soon." [spoiler]Star Wars: The Force Unleashed quote. I was hoping for some combat.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]All Q had on him was his medbag, so combat's not really his strong suit. Might as well just end the post here since you've pretty much just made it clear any of your character will immediately attack for no good reason.[/spoiler]
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"Она в порядке?" A Russian man spoke behind Korsis, approaching and kneeling besides the sith Lord "Is... Alright she?" He asked, this time in English in an order for the sith to understand him if he didn't know Russian
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"Да, она в порядке, Дмитрий." (Yes, she's alright, Dmitri.) He stood up and motioned for the girl to stay there before turning to Dmitri. "Почему ты здесь?" (Why are you here?) [spoiler]ayy[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]I don't feel like constantly going into translate, so just pretend it's Russian. [/spoiler] "I heard crying, I came out here to find piece from the noise of the dojo." Dmitri said this in fluent Russian, looking at the crying girl
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"I see. Dmitri, I have this under control. I will arrange a proper funeral for the girl's mother." He sighed.
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"Are you sure? I can stay if I am needed."
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"It's fine, my friend. Everything is under control. I will escort the girl to a safe place." He turned back to Evelyn and picked her up, cradling her in his arms.
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[i]light footsteps could be faintly nearby like someone was walking past but the strange thing was the was a soft glow in the distance from what is unclear. But in truth it was Sylvie wandering around in the woods which she did quite often. She was in truth a 7'6" grey skinned alien humaniod with strange tattooed markings covering her. She had long purple hair and bright purple eyes. She was at the time wearing grey shorts and a blue t-shirt. She was barefoot as she walked through the woods clearly not caring about sharp objects on the ground. The source of the glow came from her legs as she walked along but it was very dim.[/i]
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