[spoiler]Some comments to help you 1) Longer posts are usually more noticed 2) Quotation marks make it easier to see who's talking 3) Actions should be separated, having an asterisk ** or being [b]BOLD[/b] [i]ITALICIZED[/i], or [u]UNDERLINED[/u][/spoiler] [b]The gates creaked open slowly and Kross stepped out of the dojo, looking at the man before him [/b] "Welcome to the Dojo." [b]His armor was baggy and black, like a Musketeer's. And a blond mustache obscured his face [/b]