originally posted in:The New Dojo
*still laughing* Yeah, the old 'fight a monster' charade was getting old so I improved it! Ok, ok, I'll be serious now. *he rapidly fired lots of energy spheres at Kross*
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[b]Kross dodged through the energy, leaving a trail of electricity behind him. He leaped upwards, slashing his blade and clipping Virion in the foot before falling back down to the ground, and rolling away [/b]
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Damn. *Virion inspects the wound* ...wasn't that bad of a shot though. Might as well make it a bit more fair *Virion dived straight for you, pointing his sword*
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Damn. *Virion inspects the wound* ...wasn't that bad of a shot though. Might as well make it a bit more fair *Virion dived straight for you, pointing his sword*
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[b]Kross stepped to the side, slashing upwards towards Virion as he passed [/b]
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*as the sword slashed across his body, he crashed into the ground, clearly wounded*
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[b]Kross didn't stop for a second. He crushed his fist, and Virion felt his whole body stiffen, his blood quite literally freezing [/b] "Listen." [b]He kneeled down by Virion's face [/b] "One thing you should learn right now? You're not the strongest. And you probably won't be." [b]He relaxed his fist and Virion could move again [/b] "Good job fighting though." [b]He stood[/b]
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T-thanks, you too. *he attempts to heal his own wounds slowly* (so is Virion an ok character?)
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(Very much okay, but if I may make a recommendation. I'd recommend that you start this RP with a character that doesn't have any powers. So you can practice your fighting, and slowly work up to powers. Felt like you didn't really know Virion's capabilities to well. One of the important things to having a good character is understanding your character, their limits, their pet peeves, etc)