[spoiler]When writing multiple paragraphs of character dialogue like that, you only put a quotation mark at the beginning. This applies to every paragraph except for the last one. When you have multiple dialogue paragraphs that both begin and end in quotation marks, that suggests multiple speakers. Other than that, I really liked this post. TBH, I think I fight to improve, but on the DL, I fight for the first reason, as I have the maturity of a five year-old.[/spoiler]