[spoiler]Good read, fam. What I think one of your greatest strengths is would be the ability convey description. As you described each scene and then warped back to it, it really reminded me of a PTSD-like flashback contrasted by each line of Fenrir's prayer. And I gotta say, that was pretty good. Although each flashback was ambiguous and related to Fenrir's past in its own way it still got the message across. And I like that. Also, kudos to the warped angel and the white fire figure fighting. Wonder who that is?[/spoiler]