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originally posted in: THE DOJO
Edited by Hal0T1nman: 12/26/2016 7:02:47 AM
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[i]The Rise of a Rebellion[/i] [b]Garin, Dmitri, Harlock, Ian, and Korsis stood in a crumbled house in the ruins of Dojoville. Garin looked over a map of the Dojo and its lands, marking areas with a pen.[/b] We need to strike here, here, and here. [b]Each time he say "here", he circles a location on the map.[/b] Any questions? [b] Suddenly, a figure jumps down from the partially destroyed next floor. You are the figure.[/b] [spoiler]Open, intro for my plot.[/spoiler]
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  • Alpha picked up the lightsaber, as a mech stomped into view He leveled the pistol at korsis "I'm NOT letting you hurt my family, or anyone else here."

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  • Hahahaha... You idiot. [b]Garin and co. stood behind Alpha, weapons raised. He was severely out numbered.[/b] Garin: Drop your weapons Alpha. You're a good person, and I'm sorry for what I said in the courtyard... I consider you my ally, even with what's going on. Dmitri: *steps forward* C'mon kid.

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  • He unlsung his rifle with one hand, and pointed it at the crowd, while pointing the pistol at korsis the mech turned towards the crowd "After a long converation with a cool guy...... I know that I'm not a good person. however, for whatever stupid-ass reason you have.....you would attack my home? My family?" He was only wearing his armor and cloak, but had no helmet or hood up or on, and they could see his eyes were turning crimson

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  • Ian: *whispered* Shit. Garin: Alpha, calm down. [b]Tgey lower their weapons. [/b] You are not our target, nor is your family. So please, just put down the gun- [b]Korsis leapt forward, attempting to wrestle the gun from his hand. Garin slashed at Alpha's left knee, Dmitri shot at his left shoulder, Ian at his right while Harlock shot at Alpha's right knee.[/b]

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  • Alpha simply leapt straight up, firing the pistol at korsis' back, and rifle at the closest other person The mech started firing at the group, tearing into the men

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  • [spoiler]boi[/spoiler] [spoiler]PANTS[/spoiler] [spoiler]WE MAY NEED THE NON-CANNON[/spoiler] [b]Alpha's rifle was torn from his hands as Ian dashed forward and looped a wire around Alpha's neck. Korsis lay on the ground, clutching his wound.[/b]

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  • Alpha growled and grabbed the wire, fire forming in his hands to burn through it as he kicked and struggled Slowly, the whites of his eyes began to darken..

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  • Shit, Dmitri, pick up Korsis, we are leaving! [b]Suddenly, a ship appeared out of hyperspace and the hatch folded out. On the platform stood none other than the Arbiter, who was thought to be a loyalist to the Dojo- it appears that assumption was false. [/b] Get in the ship.

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  • Alpha began struggling more vigarously as the fire brightened, starting to cut through the wire. His eyes had darkened to a deep obsidian, the irises now glowing white slits, as he uses a rather vicious elbow on Ian The mech opens fire on the ship, particualarly the hatch, if you were to get on the ship, you'd be torn to shreds....which was what was happening to the ship

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  • Well, shit. Weapons free. [b]Bullets ripped through Alpha, Ian fired from the ground, Arbiter from his hip with a plasma repeater, Garin with his rifle... [/b]

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  • Alpha screamed......and dropped to his knees. Blood, fur, metal, plasma.....it all surrounded his broken and battered body "Dammit......." He shook, and you saw....his body bubbling? the flesh and bone and fabric and metal all swirled with white and red, until it was blinding

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  • What the hell? [b]They started running.[/b]

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  • All of a sudden, they were surrounded by a ring of fire Then, laughter "You really think you could escape this?" The light cleared.......a young teen, of 15, wearing plate armor emblazoned with a double headed dragon, stood where alpha was. Then....you realized, through his anger, through the power of his twin SOULs........ Alpha had regained his humanity [i]"Now turn and fight. For I am Alexander D'Angelo. Son of Daniel and Idris D'Angelo! I. Will. Not. Die. Here!"[/i] With that, he summoned a glowing straightsword, and a glowing dagger, made of gold and white energy, and ran towards the crowd

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  • Open fire! [b]They all fired, plasma, metal, smoke, fire, ash... It was like they were in Hell.[/b]

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  • He twirled, dodged, leaped, and deflected, sustaining wounds to his chest, gut, arms, and legs but he refused to die, continung on his charge until he leapt at the Arbiter, sword extended to stab him

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  • [b]His energy sword ignites, and he parries while firing his plasma repeater.[/b]

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  • He ducks, then tackles the arbiter to the ground, knocking his arms aside while thrusting downward with the dagger

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  • [b]He is blocked by Garin, and punched by Garin, and then shot 37 times in the chest by Garin's rifle.[/b]

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  • only three enter the chest plate, and he stumbles, before slicing across Garin's chestplate, tears streaming down his face...... tears of purest white.

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  • [spoiler]white tears? o bby[/spoiler] [b]Blood spurts from Garin's chest, covering Alpha in red. He falls to his knees, his sword clattering to the ground. [/b] Pl-please.... Alpha... [b]A red energy blade pierces through Alpha's chest. Korsis stood behind him, crying.[/b]

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  • He screamed, and turns around, still alive but barely He then embraced Korsis, impaling him on his own blade

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  • [b]Korsis' mouth opened in an "O", then smiled as electricity started to course through Alpha, making his heart skip beats, his skin melt, genitals shrivel, and other assorted effects.[/b]

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  • He screamed, then pulled off of the blade, panting and grunting.......even in this form, he knew he couldn't take much more.......

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  • [b]Bullets and plasma still streamed into Alpha, while Garin, my main, lay on the ground bleeding out.[/b]

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  • He crumpled over. Defeated. After a bright flash, he returned to his...altered self. but his body was battered and broken, and he obviously wouldn't be able to fight

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