originally posted in:The New Dojo
You know that you can't tell anyone?
[i]Right.[/i]
And you know that you can't get attached to them?
[i]Of course.[/i]
All right. 200 billion credits, up front.
[i]Thank you. When the time comes, I'll keep up my end of the bargain.[/i]
You better.
[b]The two characters exit, leaving the warehouse they were meeting in empty.[/b]
[spoiler]closed, open for feedback.[/spoiler]
[spoiler]listen people, this was meant to be vague[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Too vague to the point of this whole thing being piintless.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]-Where the hell are they? -Who the hell are they? -Why the hell are they? In all seriousness though, I get this isn't a writing contest and all, but more information would be great. Like describe the scene. [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Quotation marks for dialogue[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Vague[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]that's the point[/spoiler]