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originally posted in:The New Dojo
12/4/2016 2:21:04 AM
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His aura glows brighter as he pushes himself into stage 2, and lighting strikes around him from the massive power increase.
Some of the bolts his JJ, and Zane is able to quickly knock away the blade as he reaches for the star, grabbing it and jumping away with his prize.
"Hehe, you were just a tad slower then I."
He absorbs the star power, it's force allowing him to do what he thought was impossible. His hair grew longer, all the way down to his lower back as he floats slightly above the ground.
[b]Temporary power gained: Redemption stage 3[/b]
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JJ struggles to his feet, groaning. "Now that... was some bullshit." Rage powers up further, as well as Despair. At the very least, JJ won't die in one shot. However, Rage begins to shutter from side to side quite violently. JJ then prepares himself for Zane's onslaught, watching for the very first attack.
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/4/2016 5:37:36 AMHe snap vanishes, quickly closing the distance between him and JJ as he delivers a powerful punch, a boom resonating across the arena as he sends JJ back and starts to pursue him. "Let's see if you can keep up!" He closes in, preparing to unleash a devastating combo.
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JJ skids backwards, digging his feet into the ground. The wind is knocked out of him, causing him to nearly fall backwards into the hole to the roof. "I'm not going down that easily, although I do think I have a little internal bleeding..." JJ under Zane as he begins the combo, dodging the first few blows. For the next couple of blows, JJ deflects them with his sword, pushing him backwards toward the ledge. He does take the final blow however, unable to deflect or dodge any further. Rage visibly cracks, and quickly repairs itself as JJ cries out. Before he can fall off of the tower, he quickly throws his sword into the opening. When he does lose his balance and falls backwards, he teleports to his sword. He then runs down the staircase, sprinting for his life.
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"Hehe, trying to stall for time now?" He flys down and land in front of JJ, delivering a powerful kick that slams him into the stairs.
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"Oof!" JJ hits the stairs, causing some pain with Rage taking most of the force from hitting the floor. However, there was a nasty popping noise from JJ's back. He then recovered, and jumped down to the next lower set of stairs, and then began to try and stay under Zane.
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He snap vanishes again, grabbing JJ by the neck and bringing him to the top of the tower. He throws him where the next star will be and crosses his arms. "Hey Deity, spawn in two more stars will ya?"
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"While that sounds absolutely insane... I'm game." JJ recovers from the small amount of pain caused by Zane with his last attack, JJ begins to watch the star point, either waiting for a message or a star to appear.
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The deity pondered for a moment.... Then, he hit the mic. "Fu[i]c[/i]k it!" Eight hundred starts began to shoot down from the skies, lighting the dark sky up with an orange blaze. The stars hit JJ and Zane head on, sending them crashing into the floor. The starts began to hit the tower as well, fracturing its integrity.... [spoiler]Tell me when you hit 70 replies. That goes for you and Zane[/spoiler]
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He absorbs some star power, extending the duration of stage three as lighting strikes around him. He grins as he powers up, preparing to transform once again to a new level of power.
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JJ grabs some of the falling stars, absorbing their power. Suddenly, blue flames erupt from the top of the tower as Honor appears. The flame is so intense from the star power that the top of the tower went from cold and windy to something like an oven. Blue wings of fire sprouted from JJ's back, granting him as much flight as the modifiers would allow. He then formed twin shotguns in his hands from controlled ash, and headed toward the ground below the now-collapsing tower. On the way, he grabs two more stars, increasing his power even more. "Well, Zane? Let's bring the house down." While speaking, his mere presence with the flame was burning all flammable materials near him, turning them to ash. [spoiler]Okay, I need sleep. I've got stuff to do tomorrow, but I'll make an attempt to reply as much as I can.[/spoiler]
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/4/2016 2:27:35 PMA bright light temporary blinds JJ as Zane transforms again, and when it fades the earth trembles. Zane's hair has shrunk, and now only goes to just past his shoulders, and has turned blue. His shirt is gone, and instead his back us covered with silver fur that climbs all the way to his shoulders. His aura has also changed, turning from silver to blue as it radiates off of Zane. His baggy Gi has turned black as well, and JJ can see his eyes have also went from blue to silver. When he speaks it sounds like there is two of him. "Stage 4, something I've only dreamed of pushing myself too. Help me test it out won't you?" He snap vanishes right behind JJ, delivering a powerful kick that breaks the sound barrier.
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The star power and Honor allow JJ to take the hit and live, but he still goes flying, eventually stopping by hitting the floor a few times. "Okay... how about you knock that off?" JJ then raised his hands, causing fire to spread across the grasslands. Soon enough, the landscape was bare, nothing but an ashen wasteland with a destroyed tower. JJ uses the ash from everything that he's burned so far to form giant, rounded walls of ash with fire topping them off. They surrounded Zane and JJ, in about a 65 foot diameter, almost as if they were trapped in a kiln. Then, an ash storm kicked up inside of the cauldron, preventing sight. The only thing that could be seen was the tendrils of fire swirling around JJ at the other end of the kiln.
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He closes his eyes and breaths, his aura protecting him from swallowing any ash as he sends out his aura to locate JJ. "Think this ash will save you? Think again." He finds JJ and gathers aura in his hands, JJ can sense the power it gives off, but it also reveals Zane's own location. "[b]Aura Blast![/b]" He releases the built up energy at JJ, weather or not it hits he won't know until the ash clears.
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The aura blast passes through the flames, extinguishing them. However, there is no cry of pain, and the storm doesn't let up. Then out of nowhere, Zane feels a shotgun blast on the small of his back. The pellets lodge themselves inside of Zane, however far they've gotten. If Zane turns around, he can catch a glimpse of a figure covered in flame running back into the storm. After the shot however, visibility clears up slightly.
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He staggers forward, rubbing his back. Blood slowly drips through his fur, and he starts to gather energy around him. "Oh, you'll pay for that...." He unleashes the energy, blasts emitting around him in 360 degrees and punching holes in the kiln.
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A strange crackling noise can be heard off to Zane's left, just before the holes in the kiln can be heard. The ash storm stops, with the kiln remaining up. However, ash can be seen flowing back toward the wall, quickly repairing the holes. Then, blocking Zane's view, an ashen figure similar to JJ's rises, wrapped in flame. Followed by two at its sides. Then another two. And another two. Eventually, Zane was surrounded by at least 40 these ashen figures. If Zane was to check for JJ's aura, he would find it within all of the figures within the circle. He was hiding among these fakes, and giving each of them a little bit of flame in order to conceal himself. Some were obviously fake, crude and not even breathing. Others were much more lifelike, narrowing down the search to nearly 20% of what gathered. They all began to charge Zane, some leaping with their wings of flame to strike from above; others sticking to the ground and attack lower. All of them gunning for Zane. However, the ones jumping at him appeared to be slightly faster.
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He focuses power into his fingers and forms a giant aura blade that catches all the ashen clones and splits them in half as he swings. If JJ was hiding in these clones, he would feel this attack.
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A few figures avoided the blades, while most weren't fast enough. The numbers thinned from 40 to 15, with all of the more lifelike figures surviving, as well as a few of the crude ones. Now, the survivors were upon Zane. Six were in the air, the others were on the ground. The ones in the air had pistols form in their hands as they shot at Zane, careful not to damage their comrades. The ones one the ground had an ashen katana form in their hands, except for two who also got pistols. The seven with swords lunged for Zane's arms and chest, attempting to stab or slash at him. The two with pistols on the ground carefully waited for a clean shot at Zane's chest or head.
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He spins again, hitting the ones with the katana's and splitting them. He then changes his sword into a shield as he throws it at the ones with the guns, the shield ricocheting and hitting all of them.
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One of the figures with the katana is quick enough to hit Zane in the chest before he's destroyed, but it's merely a flesh wound. Nothing is left behind of the figure, save for a pile of ash. The shield destroys all but three of the last of the figures, who were barely fast enough to avoid the shield. Two are lifelike and are in the sky, one is on the ground and fake. The pistol of the one on the ground forms into throwing knives, which are promptly unleashed. The two in the sky instead siphon ash from the fallen, creating sniper rifles for both. One fires at Zane's upper spine, while the other fires for Zane's collar.
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He dashes to the side, but not before the knives hit him at his side, drawing blood. He winces from the attack, and sends an energy blast at the fake and jumps up, kicking the remaining clones.
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They both hit the ground. One continues firing at Zane, backing up and landing a shot on Zane's chest, and the other one raises his hand, sending tendrils of fire shooting upward from the ground. They head toward Zane in a straight line. Looks like the real one's been found.
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Edited by XxZANExX13: 12/5/2016 3:44:46 AMHe staggers backwards a bit from the shot, blood dripping. He recovers and moves both his hands backwards, gathering energy, so much that the air starts to tremble. "Aura....." A bright glow forms, and he shoves his hands forward, unleashing the beam. "[b]CANNON![/b]" A massive beam envelops JJ, doing serious damage and knocking him out of the kiln.
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While Zane is gathering energy, JJ quickly throws up a wall of ash. The beam bursts through it, but the wall dampened the blow minimally. JJ is sent through the side of the kiln, creating a rather large hole. Before any sign of him appears though, Zane forgot to deal with the still living figure that shot him. While Zane was firing the beam, the figure quickly snuck up on him. The very moment Zane was finished, the figure stuck with a point-blank sniper shot to the left kidney. To any normal man, that shot would've torn off most of his side, and some of his leg as well. And while Zane wasn't a normal man, the shot would still hurt like nothing else. Once the clone shot, its ashen rifle immediately turned into a sword, as it tried to deliver a blow to the spine. Meanwhile, JJ was clambering back through the hole he made, nursing his wounds by filling them with ash. He was stumbling, but the flame and ash were helping him recover.
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The sniper shot sure hurt like hell, and it definitely pissed him off as he quickly turned and grabs the clones head, crushing it. He grunts as he takes his other hand and places it over the wound, stoping the bleeding. "Oh now you've done it...." He dashes over to JJ, delivering a swift kick to his torso.
