Hey there everyone! Fireteam Ashen is a fanfiction I've started following the adventures of characters submitted by my clanmates in The Ashen Conflux. This is my first fanfiction, so any feedback would be appreciated. Chapters are individually written and posted privately in the clan for members to get a first look, and then released publicly in chunks, and are posted in such a way as to make sure that the flow is not interrupted between chapters following the same subplot.
[b]EDIT 4/19/2017: [/b]As of this moment, Fireteam Ashen is officially discontinued. I have way too many problems with the writing style, and I need to hammer these problems out. Once I can manage to do that, I'll look at potentially restarting this series. But for the time being, it is dead.
[b]EDIT 5/14/17:[/b] WIP chapters have been finished and added. As per the last update, no other chapters will be added.
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Images of Fireteam Ashen:
[spoiler][url=https://imgur.com/nC8R4bI]Avesk[/url]
[url=https://imgur.com/FeFO6wV]Validus[/url]
[url=https://imgur.com/RA6m46Z]Cosmo[/url][/spoiler]
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[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205900875/0/0]Chapter 1: Resurrection[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205901128/0/0]Chapter 2: The Tower[1][/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205901396/0/0]Chapter 3: The Tower[2][/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205901555/0/0]Chapter 4: To Slay an Archon[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205903951/0/0]Chapter 5: Debriefing[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205904755/0/0]Chapter 6: Echoes[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/205904905/0/0]Chapter 7: Whispers[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/211396466/0/0]Chapter 8: Hive[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/211396706/0/0]Chapter 9: Infiltration[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212229474/0/0]Chapter 10: The Next Step[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212229652/0/0]Chapter 11: Learning, Training[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212229749/0/0]Chapter 12: Touching the Light[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212230628/0/0]Chapter 13: The Chamber of Night[1][/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212230662/0/0]Chapter 14: The Chamber of Night[2][/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/214514940]Chapter 15: Return[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/214515477]Chapter 16: The Brewing Storm[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/219607470]Chapter 17: Exiles United[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/219607772?sort=0&page=0]Chapter 18: Assault[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/219607964?sort=0&page=0]Chapter 19: Beliks Prime[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/219608398?page=0&sort=0&showBanned=0&path=1]Chapter 20: The Exile Kell[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226870543/0/0]Chapter 21: The Archives[/url]
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One day, Avesk decided to sit down in the bar and tell the story of his old Fireteam. Recommended that you read up to Chapter 17 before beginning this.
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226870828/0/0]Tales From Twilight - Part 1[/url]
Check out [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/226603797/0/0]The Muzzy Archive[/url] for more fanfiction and lore posts!
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Bumpity. Can't read as of now, but whenever you are, I would suggest to switch the characters around at one point(maybe 25 chapters?). Get some fresh stuff in there, new directions, you get it. I'll read and see what you have later.