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originally posted in: THE DOJO
10/1/2016 10:12:10 PM
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[i]John shot at the creatures with his high powered rifle as he helped get citizens through underground escape tunnels. The rifle easily plowed through the enemy, but there were too many of them and they started to close in. When the last citizen climbed into the tunnel he shut the vault and it sealed with a hiss. When he turned around he knew he was probably going to die if he didn't get out of this tunnel soon.[/i]
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  • [b]The vault door suddenly concaves and dents. The creatures on the other side can be heard snarling and squealing. The crowds of villagers scream from the attack against the door and begin running down the passages. [/b]

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  • "F*ck me." [i]John tosses several frags through holes in the vault door.[/i]

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  • [b]The grenades fly through the holes which are apparently in the door. They all explode, completely destroying the vault door and sending a wave of fire through the tunnels which heads for John.[/b]

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  • [spoiler]1) Yeah, I f*cked up with the holes. 2) Frags wouldn't destroy a vault. 3) Frags don't work like that.[/spoiler] "That had to have at least killed a big portion of them...right?"

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  • [b]THE FIRE STILL FLIES TOWARDS JOHN.[/b] [spoiler]2) if there were holes in the vault from monsters hitting it, it's prob not that strong. 3) If an explosion enters a confined space it carries through it. At least that's what action movies told me lmao.[/spoiler]

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  • Edited by Cthulhu Agent: 10/2/2016 1:22:54 AM
    [spoiler]Frags are based off of high velocity [u]fragments[/u] of metal. Their explosive force is actually very weak. Movies try to make it look like it's the explosion that does damage when in reality it's the pieces of metal being shot out. The more you know.[/spoiler] [i]Because the grenades were frags the force was nothing more than a breeze.[/i]

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  • [b]The rest of this story was blocked....[/b]

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  • Aw, I ruined it with knawledge didn't I?

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  • [b]Ohhhhhhhhh ya you did. [/b] [b]Okay. This is what's gunna happen.[/b] [b][i]FRAG GRENADE SHIT, ERASED.[/i][/b] [b]The beasts continue to claw at the bent door, trying to make their way in to attack the villagers who scream down the hallway.[/b]

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  • [spoiler]I originally meant for him to be outside the doors when they closed so I could introduce another character...so...[/spoiler] [i]With the creatures closing in John had to act fast and make an intelligent decision of what to do.[/i] "F*ck it. Like one great man once said...." [i]John prepared himself to charge head first into the swarm of enemies with his eleven inch knife.[/i] "...LEEEEEERRRRROOOOOOOY JENKIIIIIIIINNNS!!!!!" [i]John charged through the creatures at such incredible speeds that made it impossible for the monsters to harm him at first, but pushing through so many enemies was causing his speed to slowly drop.[/i]

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  • [spoiler]*sigh* Then Y u say he's inside.[/spoiler] [b]The beasts began to back up, knowing the warrior had to tire out at some point. They claw onto the ground, marking their territory. But they knew this should only provoke their foe.[/b]

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  • [i]John backed up once he realized what the beasts were doing, but made sure to stay in a fighting stance with his knife raised.[/i] "I'm not so easy to take down, am I? Just let me pass and we'll be cool."

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  • [b]One of the beasts slowly walked towards John. While the others stepped back.[/b]

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  • [i]John waited patiently to see what the beast would do while keeping himself aware of what the other creatures are doing as well.[/i]

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  • [b]The creature suddenly pounces on John, forcing him to the ground. It begins to beat him relentlessly as the other beasts begin to swarm him.[/b]

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  • [i]John uses his speed to get out from underneath the beast and slash its side. He then charges into the swarm towards the exit once again.[/i]

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  • [b]The beasts claw him at every angle, making escape barely visible. A different approach is necessary for survival.[/b]

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  • [i]John jumps to the top of the tunnel and stabs some clamps into the ceiling. He seems to be getting tired.[/i] "That all you got?"

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  • [spoiler]But you were outside....[/spoiler] [b]The beasts run and follow John as they are killed off. Screeching in bloody revenge as their comrades die.[/b]

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  • [spoiler]I thought you said I was still inside? Whatever.[/spoiler] [i]John continues charging into the beasts with his shoulder while firing behind him with his high caliber rifle.[/i] "How many of you are there?!"

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  • [spoiler]ya but then we went back to being outside rofl[/spoiler] [b]The beasts suddenly begin to run away,due to their immense losses against the one soldier.[/b]

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  • [i]He stops running, but keeps firing. He's visibly getting tired.[/i] "You better *heavy breathing* run"

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  • [b]The beasts continue to Sprint away, and John finally has a break. But they are still in the town....raiding it.[/b]

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  • "At least I got a lot of the townsfolk out safely...ish. Only half of them died on the way to the tunnels." [i]He fires at the beasts from a distance so he can catch his breath.[/i]

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  • [spoiler]New post![/spoiler]

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