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jesus christ i was almost done with this post last night before I fell asleep and it got DELETED!! for NO REASON!! *rage mode activated* *starts destroying everything* *accidentally blows the universe up* [b]The Shi Canyon 1200 hours[/b] [i]The noon sun beat down relentlessly on the arid, scorching, massive ravine known as the Shi Canyon. A blistering wind blew from the west, sending the dry sand scattered around the rocky terrain airborne. There was not a single cloud in the sky, and nothing to provide any shade for the inhabitants of Shi Canyon. The heat was almost unbearable; however in the canyon itself, a lone train continued along its regular path, and villagers in the distant town a few miles ahead of the train were yelling, shouting, and preparing for some sort of attack. Occasionally, rocks crumbled from the canyon's cliffs, slamming into the ground with loud thumps. The train itself had about 15 carts trailing behind it, with storage carts in the back and carts with open doors near the front. The ones with open doors were empty, aside from the fact that there were seven to ten bandits in each one of them. They were preparing to raid the village ahead of them, which explained the villager's actions. Unaware to the bandit train about half a mile behind her, a woman, in her early twenties, trekked through the arid canyon. She was used to heat, however her forehead was beaded with perspiration. Her golden-bronze eyes squinted in the glaring sunlight, and her long, waist length, bright red hair was drenched with sweat, doing nothing to help cool down the woman in the blistering heat. She was about five feet six, and wore a loose, sleeveless red shirt, with black, skinny jeans, which ended halfway between her knees and ankles. All her clothes were drenched with sweat as well, and her black boots were covered with sand and dust. She had a slight tan, but it wasn't enough to show that she was used to this amount of sunlight. On each of her hands was a silver gauntlet, MK XII FireWork Gauntlets, to be precise. They reflected and shined in the glaring sunlight, and were just as covered in sand and dust as her boots were. Soon, the train whistled by her from her left, and the woman turned her head towards it. She didn't know it was a bandit train, so she extended her left arm, grabbing one of the open car's handle. Jumping into the train, she landed with a loud "thump" into a crouch. As she stood up, she looked around the car, only to find that there were seven, tall men and women, each at least six feet tall. There were four men, and three women, and all had various deadly weaponry equipped. Knives, swords, pistols. Whistling, the red-haired woman raised her gauntleted hands in front of her self, and two, two feet scimitars extend from the top of the gauntlets, one scimitar for each metal covered glove. Before the bandits could draw their pistols, she had rolled towards one, stabbing her left scimitar into his gut. When the blade came into contact with the bandit's blood, the chemicals constantly coated on the blades began exploding into fireworks, a beautiful yet deadly spectacle of colors, which didn't affect the woman using them, however her opponent was covered in hundreds of burns and flesh was torn off. Spinning around just as the other bandits were opening fire, she raised the dead bandit's body as a meat shield, which took all the bandit's bullets. Raising her left gauntlet, while the right continued to clutch her meat shield, she extended her left hand to point her palm at the bandit directly to the left of the one she had just eliminated. A small, one centimeter long barrel extended from the palm, and fired a single firework missile in the female bandit's direction, which struck her right in the chest. Another explosion of bright colors, and the bandit fell to the ground, their chest blown out, and the bandit besides her suffered major burns as well, tumbling out of the open car door. Dropping the body, the red haired woman raised both her gauntlets palms towards the four remaining bandits, a barrel extending from her right palm, the same length as the other one. The bandits, stunned by the firework show, held their guns shakily, and opened fire on the woman. However their shaky grips on their pistols made for worsened aim; most of their shots missed, while the rest the woman was able to barely block with her scimitars. She made a mad dash for the other side of the cart, causing the bandits to miss even more, and kicked off the wall behind them, spinning a three-sixty mid air as she extended her arms so the two scimitars would cut through their respective opponents. While the blades didn't make too much of a deep cut in the bandit's necks, the resulting fireworks completely blew their heads off, sending a shower of crimson red blood, as well as beautiful sparks of color. The woman landed on the car's floor, and didn't even need to do anything before the remaining two bandits jumped out of the car, running for their lives. Running to one of the car doors, the woman looked out, seeing that they were still a mile from the village. Grabbing ahold of the car's roof, she hurled herself up on top of the car, and gripped the car tightly. Slowly standing, the woman began sprint towards the front of the train, to where the conductor would be. Her footfalls were heavy, her boots getting a good grip on the roof of the train cars. She soon reached the front of the train, and hurled herself through the window, smashing the windows so she stood right besides the conductor. Having long retracted the blades into her gauntlets, she slammed a metal-coated fist into the back of the conductor's head, knocking him unconscious. Aiming her palms at the fuel tanks full of the gasoline required to drive the train, the fingertips of the gauntlets uncapped, revealing ten, miniature flamethrowers, one on each finger. A second later, and flames spewed from her fingertips, onto the gasoline tanks, and the resulting explosion was a wonderful yet frightening sight to see. The entire head of the train was blown to bits, and the cars behind were moving only due to momentum, which they soon lost and came to a standstill. 40 yards away was the woman, lying on the ground, major burns all over her body. She had jumped out of the train just before it had been blown to bits, but that didn't save her from the burns. She simply lay there, gasping for air as she stared at the bright blue heavens.[/i] Open, because Fire gave me this character
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  • [i]Her actions hadn't gone unnoticed. The sound of galloping echoes throughout the canyon, keeping a steady pace of four steeps per second, though each time a hoof hit a ground there was always the sound of a spring bouncing as it approached. The one who drew near rode a horse, though it looked more akin to a robot. The legs from it's inverted knees down were all metallic while the upper legs were chestnut brown, much like the underbelly of the horse. The eyes were a crimson red colour, while the body of the horse was a silver colour, which sent the light from the sun bouncing off the armour to blind anyone that stared at it. Whether or not Fire would be affected remains unknown. The figure that rode the horse was much like the trusty steed companion he rode upon, in that he was robotic in nature, a twisted hybrid of man and machine to some, and a glorious creation of god to others. The figure bore a long duster on his body, tattered and torn along the bottom of the outfit which had six circular, .44 sized bullets resting in the body. The figure's jumpsuit beneath it, though, that was a strange emerald green shade, adorned with black along the collar, ankles and wrists. It was a one piece suit, though it had a belt which was held up by a bandolier and the pure tightness of the belt, for the wearer didn't feel it. The bandolier had a variety of bullets encased in pure lead, each one keeping radiation from seeping out as the depleted uranium inside was still lethal. The bullets on the bandolier was for the twelve gauge shotgun across the figures back, which was a tri-barreled shotgun with no stock, but a pair of twin triggers on the flintlock-esque grip. The weapon looked foreign to these lands, much like the pair of .44 magnum revolvers at the cowboy's hip, which had yellow cylinders and a pair off yellow barrels. All of these were guns he earned through black market deals back at his old home, though who knew what other weapons the cowboy possessed on him. The figure's left arm under his duster's sleeve was a strangely made prosthetic. It was all black in nature aside from the blue insignia of the Cobalt Phoenix on the top, a gift from the first Dojo Lieutenant, who had fell in battle so long ago. His right arm was a dark grey carbon fibre arm, which had a colour of skin painted over the grey but a few scratches b the wrist gave off it's true colours. The figure seemed to have burn marks on the left half of his well aged face, though they were almost impossible to notice because of the synthetic skin he had. A dyed white beard rests on his face and looked to have been recently trimmed, though his head was covered by a brown cowboy hat that matched his duster. "Hold there, lass." The Techno-Cowboy said to the woman, with a thick Texan accent that laced his words flawlessly. [/I]

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  • [i]The woman's eyelids opened slowly, her gold-bronze eyes eyeing the cowboy. Her breathing was heavy and labored, and she was fighting to stay conscious. Her clothes, hair, and body were drenched in a mix of blood and sweat, which wasn't helping the crimson, second degree burns all over her skin.[/i] "... who're you...?" [i]She asked, her voice soft and barely audible over the blistering and howling winds. Her eyes closed, however she wasn't unconscious just yet.[/i]

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  • [i]The Cowboy didn't utter another word after the initial three were spoken on his part. Rather he dismounted the RoboHorse and allowed his steel legs to hit the dirt beneath the trio of figures close to the wreckage. Slowly but surely the Techno-Cowboy got closer and closer to the female figure that was Fire, and even though he had no intentions of harming her, it was clear she would need help soon. [/i]

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  • [i]Sighing, Fire shakily sat up, opening her eyes again. She slowly got to her feet, and stumbled towards the cowboy, her lips parched and her mouth dry.[/i] "Take me... to the... village...." [i]She croaked as she drew closer to the unknown cowboy, struggling against the darkness threatening to overwhelm and force her into unconsciousness. However as she got closer to the cowboy, the remaining bandits in the train jumped out, all aiming various different weaponry; some held 9mm pistols, others had .44 Magnums, some had AR-15s, and one had a .50 mini-gun. They aimed all their weaponry towards the two, about to slam their triggers.[/i]

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  • [i]The bandits -blam!-ed up. Royally so. JT picked Fire by the throat as she got close, before he threw her behind a rock using his pure force. A glint appeared in his eye, followed by another, and another as each of the bandits were marked by his neural TagSight aug. His hands immediately drew his revolvers as the synthetic arms of the cowboy blurred and, within nearly twenty milliseconds, he had the guns raised for the minigunner and one guy with an AR-15. The triggers were pulled, and a bullets flew at the head of twelve targets. [/i]

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  • [i]The targets were shot and killed, falling to the ground, however there was still countless more, and they opened fire on the cowboy. Fire fell behind the rock with a grunt of pain, grimacing as she stood up. She wanted to help. Bullets were flying everywhere, most headed towards the cowboy, however many were headed towards Fire as well. [/i]

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  • [b][u]Pants:[/u][/b] [spoiler]Mind if I take it from here?[/spoiler] [i]The Train wobbled and tipped on the cliff side tracks. The 3 mile drop seeming to beckon the trains presence. As it continued to wobble and tip, bandits and mob members jump from the carts and on to the tracks. Two dozen at the least. The train hits a sharp turn, but this causes enough stress to throw it off the side of the tracks, sending the back of the carts flying upwards, still attached to their hinges. The back cart almost meets the front before the train is sent flying off, and into the canyon below. The smell of burning marijuana and Cocaine fills the air, reaching Yang-*cough!*-The woman. But what also is reaching her...is the sound of many. MANY. Angry bandits running her way.[/i]

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  • JT was completely capable of handling whatever the Bandits decided to throw at him due to him having an army on call almost all the time, though he didn't want to endanger the life of the female that had nearly lost hers trying to escape. And so he s printed back to the woman, grabbed her and put her on the RoboHorse, which started to run back to the Dojo as JT got on it as well, his left arm wrapped around her to keep her safe and to grab the horses reigns while his right reloaded and continued to fire at the bandits.

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  • [i]Fire turned to the best of her ability, pointing her left gauntlet towards the bandits, barrel facing them. She fired two firework missiles, which exploded into a spectacle of colorful sparks, and bandits dropped like flies, from the cowboy's shooting and the fireworks. They were soon out of sight, and Fire looked at the cowboy.[/i] "... they're gonna raid the village...." [i]She muttered, wanting to go back and take them out before they could kill any villagers.[/i]

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  • [i]JT's left hand pulled itself to his left ear as he holstered the revolver in his right, and the horse started going to the Dojo on its own. "Whiskey Team, rendezvous with Alpha and Foxtrot, keep the village protected. Couple bandits, your platoon should be able to keep them in check." JT spoke with a tone of command to his words. It seemed the cowboy must've led a sizable force at this point, maybe a PMC or a military sect. Either way, the Village of Dojoville was surely safe. [/i]

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  • [i]Fire nodded in thanks, staring straight ahead now. Her gold-bronze eyes took int he scenery, and she awaited for their arrival at the dojo. She was slowly loosing her grip on consciousness, due to blood loss.[/i]

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  • [i]When the horse got up the steps to the Dojo and past the Red Samurai, the horse bursts through the front gates and JT dismounts the steed, sliding Fire off and onto the ground. If she were to be injured badly then he'd have to take her to his Clinic, otherwise she's good to rest up. [/i]

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  • [i]Fire finally faded out of consciousness, about time. Her skin was unnaturally pale, and the bloody swear drenching her body was beginning to dry. Her breathing was shallow, gradually getting slower and slower.[/i]

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  • [i]JT had picked her up and in his arms, before he started sprinting to his L.I.M.B Clinic, his spring loaded legs propelling him forwards with greater speed than ever. He kicked down the door to his Clinic, onto to head to the back room of what looked to be his house, forgetting that his clinic was in Dojoville and he only had an Emergency Aug Station here. And so he rested Fire back-down on the aug table, grabbed a knife, and ripped her clothing open. He was a middle aged father of four, so he wasn't focused on her body or any non consensual Bill Cosby shit, he was legitimately trying to save a life here. [/i]

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  • [i]There was not an inch on her body where the skin was not scorched, and in many places, such as the abdomen, chest, and arms, the there were burns deep into the flesh. On Fire's upper back, there were six, deep gashes, tearing through her skin. The skin and flesh on her calves, however, was the worse part. Nearly all the flesh was scorched away from her calves and lower thighs, almost straight to the bone. It was a miracle she hasn't died from blood loss yet. Her face and head wasn't too damage, only a few minor burns on her cheeks and forehead. The skin underneath her gauntlets was unharmed.[/i]

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  • [i]And this is where JT had to pull something extreme, because he knew she wouldn't want to be burned. The left half of JT's face was permanently burned, so he understood the pain. And so thee cowboy grabbed a mask and a few filters to t, placed it on her face, and grabbed a knife. Slowly gasses were pumped into Fire in an attempt to render her unconscious, and JT grabbed a knife. He started to skin his patient, and when he had a skinless figure he put a layer of synthetic skin on each of the limbs, this mixture being twice as strong as human skin but just as thick. He painted it to be the colour of Fire's old skin and to react like it did before, which was good. [/i]

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  • [i]Fire remained unconscious, the flesh on her legs still scorched nearly to the bone. She dreamt, dreamt of flames, heat, and the pain of her skin being peeled off enter her dreams, as she screamed inwardly.[/i]

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  • [spoiler]JT did the process to the while body fam, only part that isn't fireproof is lower lady bits. [/spoiler] [i]JT slowly removed his mask and gently rested a blanket over the woman, but not before swapping out the bedsheets for fresher ones and putting her in a set of his Daughter's clothes, even though they were a bit snug. He tried his best to make it more comfortable for her, before he left the spare bedroom to go ahead and work on his book. [/i]

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  • [spoiler]Mmmmmmkay.[/spoiler][i]A few hours later, Fire awoke, feeling a little weird; as though she were in somebody else's skin. She looked down, and the first thing she noticed was that her clothes had been changed. She blushed at the thought, shaking her head. The second thing noticed was that there wasn't a singe trace of the wounds she got after blowing the train to bits. She stared at her unblemished skin, feeling around it. It all felt very different. She grabbed her gauntlets, putting them on, and couldn't stop wondering why her skin wasn't at all damaged.[/i]

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  • [i]The door was only slightly open and[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ckom3gf57Yw]some sort of music[/url] was coming from the next room, though nothing was visible at that point. [/I]

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  • [i]Fire began slowly walking towards the door, quietly pushing it open as she looked around for the source of the music.[/i]

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  • [i]The oaken door opened to reveal a well furnished room. Her door was the farthest on the left was when compared to the entrance, which was in the left corner of the house-like room. What greeted her was a set of four brown couches with a coffee table in the middle, under what looked to be a skinned bears pelt. Across the room and in the opposite corner of the oaken walled room was a desk, and the man in the duster sitting at it, with a quill in his hand and an empty journal on an oaken desk. There was a door just to his right and four oaken doors next to the one Fire peers her head out of. Finally, multiple painting seemed to line the walls of the house, with the occasional animal head in a frame over the fire pit on the opposite wall from the door. The music seemed to come from a set of speakers on his table, which didn't seem to be linked to any phones but the TacPad on his right forearm. JT still hadn't heard the door open as he was listening to the music and writing, but he was still working away at what he was writing. [/i]

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  • [i]After taking a look around, Fire shifted her attention to JT. She rapped on the door with her right, gauntleted knuckle, not wanting to barge in without warning. The light reflected in her warm, gold-bronze eyes as she watched the cowboy, and she slowly began walking into the room, hands hanging awkwardly at her sides. Her long, waist length red hair hung loosely around her, and it was all tangled up.[/i]

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  • [i]The knocking was almost enough to make the Marshal grab the yellow-barreled and yellow-cylindered revolver that rested to the left of his book, but it didn't and only forced him to shift his gaze over to Fire, and turn slightly in his chair. After realizing who it was, the figure turned to write again. "Good, you're alive."[/i]

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  • "Um... yeah...." [i]Fire said, walking behind JT to see what he was writing.[/i] "All thanks to you. But... how?" [i]She asked, wanting to know both why and how the cowboy saved her.[/i]

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