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THE DOJO

[i] The Dojo. Located on the diverse planet of Tatakai, the Dojo consists of the largest gathering of fighters the universe has ever seen. Men and women from all different cultures, races and worlds come to train, compete and fight together. Many battles have been raged on its soil, but it remains standing. Here, one can write, fight and talk with other writers who seek to create stories with one another. All you have to do is start typing.[/i] [b][i]The New Dojo(JOIN HERE!)[/i][/b] [spoiler]Join our group! Free of charge! I swear! https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Forum/1677784/0/3/0 USE THIS LINK IF THAT OTHER ONE DOES NOT WORK. https://www.bungie.net/en/Groups/Chat?groupId=1677784 Once you pass your test and have joined the group sign here: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/215168136/0/0 NOTE: You do not have to be tested to join the dojo. Only to PvP. [/spoiler] [b][i]Who we are[/i][/b] [spoiler] The dojo is an ENTRY LEVEL AND ONE OF THE ONLY PUBLIC RP THREADS. RP is A way of interactive creative writing. Where you can go on adventures, have fights and generally have fun. Think of dungeons and dragons, but its horribly imbalanced since there is not an experience system or dice. Its great! The Dojo loves different opinions, ideas and writing no matter if you are new to RP(roleplay) or extremely experienced. If you have an opinion to share about how to make the dojo better, contact one of the Sensei's that run the place (We would prefer this rather then excessive and unintelligent shit talking). Every work of writing is appreciated and accepted (shitposts…maybe not so much). [/spoiler] [b][i]How we work(list of Admins included)[/i][/b] [spoiler] The dojo is run by a group of Sensei’s. These Sensei’s will make up most of the game changing decisions to benefit The Dojo. BUT Everyone's opinion matters a great deal. So the Sensei’s will make poll’s within the group for the members to vote and decide on big issues/ideas. Even then, the sensei’s will inform the group of changes and decisions made. The list of sensei’s are as follows: Inflatablepants/Pants(GONE ON HIATUS) The God-Eater/Cob Royalblade/Royal Fresh Cazberry/Vio nullCth/Cth And the leader of the dojo union: Tubbs [/spoiler] [b][i]OUR GOAL[/i][/b] [spoiler] At the dojo, we want to provide an amazing place for you to improve on your writing in a fun way. We love new faces, and will accept you as soon as you walk up to the door. We also love other RP threads that have really awesome stuff, and we want to invite them all here so we can have a hub world of sorts. Whether this is through an interdimensional portal, space ships or whatever. We want everyone we can to be a part of this and interact with everyone! This way, you can meet people you never would have met before. If you are a leader of an RP group and are interested in this, please contact me so we can discuss further! I like discussing stuff! [/spoiler] [b][i]RULES[/i][/b] [spoiler]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212678270/0/0[/spoiler] [b][i]How to PvP[/i][/b] [spoiler] Player VS Player Is what the dojo is known for. Basically, you can fight each others characters with your own, to see who’s the best or to simply make some kick ass action. Please follow all the rules while you fight, so you can make it as badass as possible. In order to PvP you must be tested by a sensei, or a designated tester of the dojo. You can find out who is a tester by seeing "How we Work." Also, When you fight another player make sure that you always react to their move. The best way to do this is like this. >Have a stanza dedicated to your reaction from you opponents last reply. >Have a stanza dedicated to your attack. If you completely block another opponents attack, its courteous to not attack them within the same reply. This way, you’ll never go wrong. [/spoiler] [b][I]World Creation(Getting started at the Dojo starts here)[/i][/b] [spoiler] This is the most important section for you RP experience. This is where you make your characters, their stories, where they could live. Also, this is where you can create a Faction to participate in the thread, as well as having access to writing for the group(The stories you write do not have to relate to the dojo at all) Bio's(RECCOMENDED) https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212677641/0/0 Backstory for Characters https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1677784/217556475/0/0 Property Creator https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1677784/220228259/0/0 Writers Hub https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1677784/220575696/0/0 Faction Creator https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/1677784/222042811/0/0 [/spoiler] [b][i]The Dojo[/i][/b] [spoiler] Physical Appearance https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212677894/0/0 NOTE: The dojo only uses Mac Cannons for any kind of defense. If you are lookin to invade with your discount armies, you will be fighting the characters of the thread and possibly their factions. [/spoiler] [b][i]The World of Tatakai[/i][/b] [spoiler] Map of Tatakai: http://i.imgur.com/6xm09eO.jpg Landscapes of Tatakai https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/212678163/0/0 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/213673051/0/0 Lore  (WORK IN PROGRESS) https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/217554253/0/0 Landmarks of Tatakai https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/217506568/0/0 Cities of Tatakai  https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/217516337/0/0 [/spoiler] [b][i]The Digital Dojo[/i][/b] [spoiler] The Digital dojo was what we had used before this new Dojo. Here is a link to the old thread, as well as the old group. Please read our past works! Digital Dojo Thread:https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/819710/126982640 Digital Dojo Group: https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/819710 [/spoiler] [b]The OP(Inflatablepants) is on hiatus. If you have any questions please refer to the following people:[/b] [spoiler]Cobalt Pheonix: CobaltPHNX Royal: JustAStranger Caz: PoisonousBerry Tubbs:Bler (Tubbs is not actually an admin, but he has been here long enough and is like an ever existing presence. Kinda weird.)[/spoiler]
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  • Edited by gizmonster: 1/4/2017 4:49:09 AM
    I think I wandered in here by mistake, is this an online RP or something, and where is the exit? Ooh, I think I can "kill" people. Very interesting..

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    • [i]Coping With Paralysis[/i] *Sketch sat on a bench overlooking lake. He wasn't doing anything, though... He was just staring... He was only wearing slate sweat pants and a grey t-shirt. He didn't even have his backpack with him.* *He slouched as he sat, his tail hanging limply off the bench and his ears laid back. His eyes were a deep purple and his fur was ruffled and bunched up, as opposed to it's usual well-combed state.* *He looked down at his legs, attempting to move them. All he managed to get were a few muscles to tense up, but just barely. He looked back over the water, whimpering.* [spoiler]Open for interaction.[/spoiler]

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      • [i]Cravis's newly reclaimed from demon child flat[/i] You can probably guess what happened. Call for Cravis from boss et cetera et cetera. "What is it now? Criminal coffee shop? Suspicious insurance firms!?" "Well, you'll be exited to know you can use your real name for this one." (Cravis rolled his eyes ) "Gosh, I'm now enlightened." "All you need to do is hire these guys." (Cravis recived a map and a logo, the logo being this: https://www.google.co.uk/search?client=ms-android-samsung&biw=360&bih=295&tbm=isch&sa=1&ei=AfhrWJXxAsfWgAaX-rzgBw&q=titanfall+6-4+logo&oq=titanfall+6-4+logo&gs_l=mobile-gws-img.3...6233.8647.0.9125.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0..0.0....0...1c.1j4.64.mobile-gws-img..0.0.0.ukZN42YAUYU#imgrc=Kwvf726kM5Co0M%3A ) "And you can't do it because...? You once stepped on ones toe?" "Because I'm preoccupied." (He closed the transmission. Cravis sighed.) "I hate my job."

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        • [b][u]A NEW RULE HAS BEEN ADDED. SEE #12 IN THE RULES SECTION.[/u][/b]

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          • [b]Pilot Sawyer(not someone from the game btw, just a pilot I made up) walks around the Shi Desert in LN[/b] LN- Movement ahead. Sawyer- What is it? LN- Looks like some kind of vehicle coming our way. Sawyer- Open the cockpit, I'll step out and talk to whoever is there. [b]the cockpit opens and Sawyer stands up [/b] [b]the vehicle stops in front of them and 4 bandits get out with machine guns and various other junk as armor[/b] Sawyer- Hi there. This is Pilot Sawyer from the Militia. What are you doing out here? Bandit 1- Robbing ya. Get em! [b]they all open fire at him and the cockpit closes back immediately as he gets back in[/b] [b]LN(the Titan) gets ready to fire and they all get in the car and start to drive away[/b] Sawyer- Throw me at them. LN- Are you sure? Sawyer- 80 percent. LN- Ok. [b]the cockpit opens up and LN picks up Sawyer, then launches him at the vehicle[/b] [b]he almost makes it on top but they speed up and he grapples on the back before hitting the ground, he's now being dragged along the ground of the desert on the back of the vehicle[/b] [b]Sawyer throws a firestar at the vehicle and it goes through the back window then hits the bandit in the passengers seat(killing him) and the fire shooting out kills the driver[/b] [b]Sawyer then ungrapples and the car crashes into a building, one bandit gets out of the car with a burned arm and goes to shoot Sawyer with his machine gun[/b] [b]LN is running to Sawyer but won't make it in time[/b] [spoiler]open[/spoiler] [spoiler]save him lol[/spoiler]

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            • [b]Lore nugget[/b] [spoiler]I will do these every once in a while. They will be a backstory of one of my characters.[/spoiler] "Once we take this system, set a course for Tatakai. There are some very powerful energy markings coming from there." [b]These words were spoken by a huge Mechonus who looked somewhat like Fortis, except much bigger. This is because it was Fortis in the past.[/b] "Also, get me readings on the movement of nearby hostiles. Nitro warned me of some strange unbeatable fleet that travels these lands... err... spaces." [spoiler]Yes, it is short. They are not supposed to be books hence the title nugget.[/spoiler] [spoiler]Open for reactions, but not for interactions.[/spoiler]

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              • [b]Tubb's precious puppy-child-baby-thing.[/b] [i]Somewhere in the Dojo...[/i] A small, less than a foot tall anthropomorphic pup in a pink santa hat was sitting by the starbucks, playing with an empty cup with no lid. By appearance, it looked like a corgi, but with a longer tail. She fiddled with the cup, eventually putting it over her muzzle. She giggled as she looked around with it on her face.

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                • Ian stood before the gates of the Dojo, twirling his sword. "I'm back, assholes. And with a vengeance." [spoiler]open[/spoiler] [spoiler]as[/spoiler] [spoiler]f-ck[/spoiler]

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                  • Edited by Gravemind94: 1/2/2017 10:53:39 PM
                    Improve writing? I thought this was some kind of arena? Cause I do have something I write.

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                    • [spoiler]I'll make it easier on you, Ook[/spoiler] Ian sat in his temporary apartment in Dojoville, reading a book on mechanics when there was a knock on the door. [spoiler]open to Ook[/spoiler]

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                      • Edited by JealousOrc: 1/2/2017 10:23:01 PM
                        [b]a Legion Titan walks up to the gates of the Dojo and the cockpit opens, with a young pilot stepping out onto the bottom part that opened up(so he's still on the Titan but out of the cockpit(it's hard to explain ok))[/b] Hello? Anybody home? I heard Jack Cooper was last seen here. [spoiler]open[/spoiler] [spoiler]sorry for the pilot lol but I just finished Titanfall 2 and multiple others have pilots so shut up[/spoiler]

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                        • (The figure appeared at Ian ' s door) "Ian. Come outside."

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                          • Edited by Jörmungandr: 1/3/2017 3:14:43 AM
                            [b][u]One Scourge Ends, Just For Another To Take Its Place[/u][/b] [b]Lyra // 10:00 PM // Dojoville [/b] [i]One snap for the dying One click to end the day Another story with a mangled scene It couldn't happen any other way Natural Born Killer - Avenged Sevenfold[/i] "[b]Ready to head in.[/b]" "Alright. Gimme a sec. Gotta-" [i]She brought her hand away from the comm thingy in her ear and proceeded to slam her foot down on a man's chest. His leg had recently been blown off and he was bleeding out.[/i] "-finish up some-" [i]She put a bullet in his head. His brains splattered everywhere, including on her. However, she didn't seem to care.[/i] "-business-" [i]She knelt down on another's chest.[/i] "-here." [i]She slashed his neck.[/i] "[b]Sounds fun.[/b]" "It is." "[b]Ready yet?[/b]" "Almost." [i]She walked up to a man gasping for air, his lung having been recently punctured. This was her main target. She grabbed a nearby steel cable and approached him. Before doing anything, she looked out at the skyline. They were pretty high up. On top of a tower in fact. She then approached the man and wrapped the cable around his neck.[/i] "[b]Now?[/b]" "Jesus Christ, hold on." [i]She picked him up.[/i] "Almost ready." "[u]P-please... I have... A... Family...[/u]" "And they'll be waiting for you here in a few minutes." [i]She started to walk towards the edge.[/i] "[b]...How much longer?[/b]" "...aaannnd..." [i]She lifted him up.[/i] "Now." [i]She threw him over the edge.[/i] [b]Scarlet // 10:05 PM // Dojoville[/b] [i]No remorse No repent We don't care What it meant Another day Another death Another sorrow Another breath[/i] [i]No Remorse - Metallica[/i] [i]She busted through the door, shattering it. A scream was heard. She followed the source, finding a woman and a small child cradled in her arms. What she didn't see was the man waiting in the doorway as she walked past. He hit her in the face with a hammer. She, not even looking at him, grabbed him by his head and threw him through the wall. Seeing this, the woman was practically wailing.[/i] "[i][u]Please. No. I have a husband and-[/u][/i] "[b]And you'll be seeing him here in about 30 seconds.[/b]" [i]She pulled out the RailJack, a railgun, and shot. It blew the kid's head into a million different pieces and his torso went with it. However, the slug didn't stop there. It went clean through the woman's chest, making a hole many times it's size, and flew off into the distance. Next, she held her hand to her ear.[/i] "[b]Its done.[/b]" "Good." "[b]I take it the payment will be in my account?[/b]" "It already is." "[b]Wonderful.[/b]" "Pleasure doing business with you." "[b]Mhm.[/b]" "Yknow, with how good you are at this, I doubt this'll be our last encounter." "[b]I'd hope not... Just call upon me when you need something done. Just make sure you have the credits.[/b]" "Oh, I will." "[b]Great. For now, this is Scarlet signing off.[/b]" [spoiler]Both are open. Don't fight Scarlet unless you have some good shit though.[/spoiler]

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                            • Edited by FlimsyRoastBeef: 1/2/2017 7:04:29 PM
                              Kuben Blisk stood outside the gates of the Dojo, wearing his combat armor with a Wingman in his right hand. "Oi! Open up!" [spoiler]open[/spoiler]

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                              • Edited by ookshmook: 1/2/2017 7:31:25 PM
                                [i]dojoville, next to a sodden looking Cravis[/i] There was a noise in Cravis's ear. His boss. Again. "Dammit, What is it now?" He pressed a button on a device on his ear, and looked at a wall. At first there was only audio. "Face the rain." He faced the rain, and a projection of the figure appeared. Daniel was determined to get in the first sentence, and succeeded. "How did you know I was in the rain?" "That links in to my question. Why arn't you in your flat?" "There's a demon child in my flat." "Not your idea?" "She was tired! I don't want a grumpy demon child walking around! We've got enough brutal murders as it is!" "I suppose you have a point. Anyway, I have an assignment for you. It's nothing big, and links in with your last. You remember the last?" "Yes." "He has a girlfriend. You have an assignment to make them personally as relaxed as possible, while simultaneously making the dojo seem undesirable." "That's an oxymoron." "If you carry on like that, 'Cravis's job' will be an oxymoron." "Yes, sir." [spoiler]closed.[/spoiler]

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                                • [b]Old Friends.[/b] Falk sat back in his chair. His slick black hair on all its ends from the sweat down his scarred light blue skin. He drank some of the water in his steel bottle to hydrate his crackling dry mouth from the work he was putting into the house. All the walls were up, the porch was up, the flooring was in, the basement was dug out and had a ladder leading into it, the upstairs was almost complete and the glass windows were yet to be installed on the spruce and cedar structure. While large, it was the definition of cozy. But that was about to change with the man that walked up the mountain.... [spoiler]For Tubbs[/spoiler]

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                                  • [b][i]Wakin' up....[/i][/b] [b]Ash and dust floated through the air as Tubbs awoke, strapped to a wall by chains. The room was small, only about 6 by 6, that gave barely enough room to lie down In the corners were four bookcases, in between each was a toilet. Seems Tubbs was supposed to have a roommate... [/b] [spoiler]Tubbs! [/spoiler]

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                                    • Edited by FlimsyRoastBeef: 1/1/2017 1:56:53 AM
                                      Ian roamed the streets of the Dojo, a bottle of whiskey in his hand. He hummed a tune that sounded a lot like War Pigs by Black Sabbath. He came to his old house from when he still lived there. He threw the bottle of whiskey at the house and punched the ground, again and again until his hands bled. "GODDAMNIT! GOD F--KING DAMNIT! WHY?! WHY?!?! GODDAMNIT!" [spoiler]open[/spoiler]

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                                      • [b]The journey begins.[/b] [b]Fortis contacted Tubbs, Royal, and Q via his wrist watch.[/b] "Guys, I have a plan to stop the invasion. There is this guy who I know who might be able to forge a sword strong enough to destroy these dark creatures assailing the dojo. Gather all the forces you have and meet me on my planet as soon as possible. Oh, and gather anyone else from the dojo that you can find. We need all the help we can get." [spoiler]Open, this is were my plot really starts to take off.[/spoiler]

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                                        • [b]a strange little girl.[/b] [i]a strange girl was sitting on top of ridiculously large box. She had blonde and bright green eyes. She was very short so it was kinda of strange how she actually got top the box. She sat there while holding a very strange peculiar doll and she had a giant pair razor sharp scissors that were strapped to her back. She wore a solid black dress. Underneath her the gaint box shook violently as something stirred within. It growled loudly and shook the box. [/i] "No its not time for you yet"she says [i]she taps the box and it whines loudly.[/i] "No not yet...but soon..."she says [spoiler]open[/spoiler]

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                                          • [b]An interesting sight.[/b] [spoiler]This is not part of my plot BTW.[/spoiler] [b]A human man about the age of thirty broke into a house on the dojo. He pulled out a handgun and shot everyone inside.[/b] "Now that I have a house, I need a job." [b]He went and hung up a sign that read [i]Mercenary for hire[/i] on the porch.[/b] [spoiler]Open, finally introducing a character that isn't OP.[/spoiler]

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                                            • [spoiler]this is non-canon, I just want to see what people do[/spoiler] [spoiler]don't go crazy, okay?[/spoiler] Ian clutched his left side, blood dripping from his hand. "Shit... Ow." He had just reached the gates when he heard footsteps behind him. You're the person that made the sound. ((open, could be considered a simulation))

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                                              • Edited by Old Man Kent: 1/15/2017 7:13:09 AM
                                                [spoiler]Begin the music on the 7th paragraph, excluding dialogue.[/spoiler] [b]Bring My Daughter Home... | Kent's Main Operating Base | Part III[/b] Today he would see her. After six years, Kent would finally see his daughter. When on Earth, he had met a woman he wanted to be with for the rest of his life, even if he barely got to see her. She meant everything to him - she still does mean everything to him. She is home - [i]his[/i] home. The helipad is filled with soldiers, lined up on either side of the walkway, their guns resting on their shoulders, pointing towards the sky. The sky is clear, and the wind light, lazily blowing snow off of the hangers edge. There had been a slight snow squall earlier in the day, though by now it had turned to dust. Kent stands at the end of the walkway, staring at the helipad. He is wearing a black suit, with a white button-down shirt and a red tie. If he were to see his daughter today, he wanted to look as pleasing as possible. He runs his fingers through his hair - he's nervous. He isn't sure what his daughter looks like by now, having not seen her ever since she was a newborn. He felt guilty for the most part, leaving her at such a terrible time, just when she needed him most. [i]There were things I had to do, things that depended on me…[/i] it still didn't sound right to him. Some time had passed, but finally, the helicopter had arrived. The reverberation from the engine causing Kent's body to vibrate. The force of the propellers pushes the snow away in a circular motion, sending it into the air. Kent starts to walk forward as the helicopter doors open. His heart is beating a mile a minute, he can not contain his anxiousness. Two soldiers hop out of the helicopter, then, turning around, they assist someone out - his daughter. As she drops down onto the floor, she looks up with a smile. [i]That smile…[/i] Kent thought to himself, grinning. Her jet-black hair is tied into a bun, with two strands of hair coming down past the front of her ears. [i]She is beautiful…[/i] Kent thought to himself, her bright blue eyes looking into his. Her face seems so perfect to him. [i]She looks so much like her mother...[/i] Kent wraps his arms around her, hugging her as tight as he can - she's here now. Kent releases a sigh of relief as she wraps her arms around the back of his neck, squeezing tightly. “Hi dad.” She said, tears filling her eyes. “Hey sweetie, I've missed you.” He says, choking on the words. "I missed you to-" She's cut off. A [i]crack[/i] echoes from the distance, sending a jolt of fear into Kent's body. His daughter yelps, collapsing to the ground, holding the left side of her waist. Kent sits there in shock, unknowing of what to do. He feels anger, despair, sadness all at once. [i]Why now? Why her…[/i] Kent grabs his daughter as the soldiers begin to fire at the location of the sniper. The bullets ring through his ears, the shouting of Kent's men seem so distant to him, faded and broken. It's cold. The only warmth available to him was her blood. She lay there, crying in his arms at the pain, wishing for it to stop. There was nothing she could do - nothing [i]they[/i] could do. Her blue eyes glistened as tears rolled down her cheek, it was almost time. He had been holding her in his arms, cradling her, whispering to her. “It's okay baby girl… it's okay. Shh, shh. Everything is going to be okay…” He too, was crying. Her breathe becomes raspy, each inhale becoming more faint after every exhale. Her bloodshot eyes seem to peer through his, appearing emotionless - like glass. Her grip slowly fades as her head slumps down over his forearm. Her final breath leaves her cold, pale lips. The hand she used to cover her wound had finally fallen off, revealing her blood drenched clothes. She was only six. “Baby please… don't go, baby… no, please… please baby girl…” He pulled her closer, cradling her against his own chest. He was crying even more now. He holds up the back of her head, his tears slowly sliding down his cheek and onto her pale forehead. Her hair smelling like raspberry-vanilla - her favorite. He clung to her, begging, praying for his pride and joy - his baby - to return back to him. He needed her. This world is too cruel alone - he can't do this alone. He tries to stand as his knees tremble and shake. He feels weak, helpless, struggling to lift his own daughters body from the floor. She couldn't hold onto the back of his neck like she had before. This was much more difficult. He tries to take a few steps forward, just to collapse on the floor once again, sobbing as he cradles his now deceased daughter. He never wanted this to happen. It was over. [spoiler]Closed. Open to feedback.[/spoiler]

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                                                • [b]Tubbs walks around the Dojo, angry at someone[/b] ALPHA! COME OUT AND FIGHT ME LIKE A MAN! [spoiler]open to Goat[/spoiler]

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                                                  • I'm Kuben Blisk now. Deal with it.

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