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Edited by HappyLine: 6/18/2016 2:57:12 AM
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I made a story.

A+ ~ Great writing, characters, etc.

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A- ~ Great story, but a couple flaws.

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B+ ~ Good, but there are some problems.

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B- ~ Alright; there's some points need fixing.

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C ~ Eh. That's all.

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D ~ What a waste of time.

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F ~ Why.

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I made a poll a couple months ago for people of the Destiny community to review a little series that I am making with a friend. It's called [u]Destiny: Underground[/u], and I got the idea from a dream I had. So the first time I published it and shared in on the Destiny forums, I was met with slightly positive reviews, but it didn't feel good. The story was confusing, messy, and overall just plain dull. I decided to redo it with my friend, and now it's back to chapter 1. Let me know what you think by answering the poll! [b]Please grade appropriately and honestly. This information is extremely important to me.[/b]

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  • You could make it a lot more detailed. I love detailed. I loved it though, the dialogue a little to kiddish their guardians defenders of darkness of course if it it's someone like cayde sadistic in all ways lol its okay

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