http://youtu.be/sLUf01qCdic
Hello everyone! I know it's the day after Valentine's Day, but I'd like to share this short video I made for the day. I've gotten some nice feedback on it and some good suggestions for future projects. This is the first parody video I make that [spoiler][/spoiler]has been drawn out so I know my drawings aren't top notch. Also I'd like to submit this for Movie of the week seeing as how the video suits the theme of this week.
Hope you guys like it and Happy late Valentine's Day lol :3
#MOTWsubmission
Edit: Thanks everyone for the feedback on my video! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I really appreciate the suggestions and feedback on things I should change or leave out next time. It helps me to understand what it is that people like and dislike. Thanks for watching! ^_^
Edit 2: Here is the link on the Creations page. If you could vote on that I'd appreciate it very much ^_^
https://www.bungie.net/en/Community/Detail?itemId=192148598
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Good job. I liked it. You're definitely talented and have potential. My [u]opinion[/u]: -Some parts were unnecessarily drawn out. I remember at least 3 times where I thought, "ok, next scene please" -this also made the video feel too long. -John Cena was not funny and, despite the sketch being funny, really left a bad taste in my mouth about it. -the build up at the end was perfect. I honestly thought, "Oh this is gonna be good. (Pause) it better good if I'm waiting like this... (Pause) oh my god! He's totally going to make this a female avatar controlled by a dude gag and the chick at the end is going to say something like, "Sorry for the wait, my wife wouldn't grab me a beer, so I had to get it... So, crucible later?" -good music choice. -I like the chat bubbles and the pop. Could have been a bit more subtle. Any way, good job and keep it up