I just fixed what I thought needed to be fixed. You don't have to use any of this. I love the story so far. Good luck continuing it! :) (I did this on mobile, so if anything looks weird or out of place feel free to change it.) The Lone Wolf -Chapter one- There was a dead silence as his lifeless body fell to the floor. "Well, he deserved that," the mysterious figure said. I couldn't tell what or who he was, but I knew he wasn't human. The man who had been shot was a member of the fire team, a Titan male. "There were two of us left. It was just her and I. The three of us were brought back together, and the three of us are going to die together," I thought. We were looking for a rogue guardian. A Warlock who wanted knowledge about the Vex and where they came from. It was almost an obsession. Only one guardian had gone after him before. A hero, the son of the speaker, Saint-14. The person spoke,"Hey, hero, eyes open for the next show." One shot fired from a gun into her head. The next thing I knew I was knocked out. I don't know why, but I was wanted alive. And my fire team wasn't. But I'm a hunter. There are over a hundred hunters, and I was the least skilled in the group. As I woke up I saw the bones of previous guardians who had been captured. "He's over here, sir," someone said.