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originally posted in:The Roleplay League
12/2/2015 12:19:34 AM
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I would break it up. A giant wall of text is hard to read, other wise good story and grammar.
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I can't do that it keeps saying I have to many paragraphs everyone time I try it says I can't go then 4.
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Oh, I mean like this. John walked up a hill and saw a ogre, the ogre saw John and took a few giant steps towards him. John backed up and pulled his sword from his sheath, he readied himself for the battle ahead of him. Then you would simply continue the next part of the story here. As it is a different section of the story.
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Look at it now tell me if you like that better.
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There you go man! So much better, on your way bro.
