Note: this is a remake of the taken kings first mission, most things you hear are different. After this I'm skipping ahead to beta finding a Fireteam, after he has kicked oryx from our realm(so mission not raid) I need suggestions. Fast. I'm comfortable and all with where im taking the story, but if you have any ideas please post it in the chapter index thread(see tag). I'd like to make more and feel as if I could. So please ask! Over time, when I have more time, I'll write longer. The centurion near beta crawled and collapsed, dead. An explosion cut off the alarm for just a second. "Strange, everything seems destroyed by... Something. Shall we adjourn to the big evil thing?" Weber just looked at beta and didn't respond. Beta got the message "What.... What is this?" The walls were decorated with a transparent black, with what seems like stars in them. Strange noise and whispers came from it. They decided to forge ahead. Eris suddenly came on the comms "Fingertips on the surface of my MIND!" The titan, instead of being frightened, laughed harder than usual. He kept walking when a face of some night solidified from the air. "He. IS, [b]HERE[/b]." Eris was frightened over the comms, as the titan punched a black psion in the face. Oddly enough, that same Psion wasn't dead, as though he killed another Psion that jumped out. "Okay what the F^ck is this." "Language Beta. language." They quickly jumped hoops through a fire throwing knight, and ran away from phalanx with the force. *A Month later* "Oryx has been kicked out of the physical realm. His essence and life still remains in his throne world, But the city, and most importantly the traveler, is safe" -Zavala after Encounter with oryx. "So about that new friend..... I'm sick of being solo." Beta walked through the tower, sitting down near his good buddy Hideo, as he liked chilling in the new monarchy couches. "Beta, we just stopped a god from killing is all. Can you ever be happy?" Weber questioned him, thinking that maybe, just maybe they could make friends with others. "Yeah, WE killed oryx. You didn't even open doors for me this time, you just say in my backpack. Well I guess I'll patrol Mars, punch some centurions in he face.... Punching can solve any problem, gets me really thinking." Beta thought out loud. "I should've found a warlock....." Weber floated away for a few seconds, before coming back. "Well there are still things we have to take care of. Apparently some cabal are gonna blow the core to the dreadnaught, oryx has a successor, and there's some big shank on the loose, also some vex-" Weber was cut off by the titan "Big shank? This'll be fun." Fin I hope you enjoyed the 5th take of SLE, all I ask is for you to create a guardian. The guardian with the most replies gets to be in the next story, but no self Bumping.