originally posted in:The Roleplay League
[spoiler] Uhh, a few things. Don't use first person words like 'I' or 'You' because people reading won't know who your indicating at. Use a persons name in a third person context.
Second thing, this is a beginning of a fight between my three characters and three people who choose to join. Basically, aim your attacks at one of my three and the fight between that character and your character will begin, until one person goes down or not. Only fight for as long as you could last in real life.
One last thing, don't control other peoples characters in speaking or actions. You can push then or slam them to the ground, but you can't make them punch themselves to death practically, without the users permission.
Sorry if that seemed like a lecture, but I hope it helps. [/spoiler]
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[spoiler] Still open for one more fight? haha[/spoiler]
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[spoiler] Let's go then. Good luck. But create a new thread. [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]sweet![/spoiler]
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Max stands behind a rock, looking at the girl and the guy battling. "Man. That girl is really cute. And cool." His ghost came out. "Pffft. Max.... You and I both know that you can't even get a girl like her!" Max looks at his ghost. "Thanks for the encouragement. You know what. I'm gonna go over there. And talk to her. And not studder." Max's ghost sighed as he disappeared into thin air, too embarassed to see what's about to happen.
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Edited by RaTheRazer: 10/24/2015 1:39:56 AM