Good story, I enjoyed reading it.
Don't listen to everyone who's commenting on your paragraphs. There are two types of people in this world, creative and analytical. This is why authors use editors to fix their grammer.
I understand where you're coming from, I got in trouble for the same stuff when I was in High School, except instead of Destiny I was waking up to play Ocarina Of Time.
I would recommend talking with your parents. They might give you more freedom of you agree to getting up on your own for school and on time, not letting it effect your grades and not taking afternoon naps. If you could do that in exchange for playing Destiny you at 3 am they might work with you.
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Good ol' OoT, I remember playing it and finding out Shiek was Zelda before my friends tried to ruin that plot twist.
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Thnx man, I'm getting tired of these stupid people commenting on grammar when I know full well how to write