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originally posted in:The Roleplay League
Edited by Kell in a Cell:
10/1/2015 9:50:21 PM
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As the skiff landed, I turned to give my final goodbyes to the last connection to my old life.
"I wish I could change your mind, brother, much as I know it is fruitless." My brother, Zavak, spoke with a pained look on his face.
"As do I, brother." I said similarly, before smiling slightly. "But we both know why I must walk this path. Even so, it baffles me that there is any room in your head to think such things with how thick your skull."
At that, he cracked a small smile, and put a hand on my shoulder. "Call it an idiot's loyalty, and be glad you hold some of it as well." He sobered slightly. "All we can do now is wish each other good fortune."
I nodded. "Aye. May you shine on, and be a beacon to those in need."
He shook his head, the smile coming back as he let his hand fall. "And may the Great Machine watch over you and keep you safe. Goodbye, brother."
I grasped his upper arm with my own in farewell. "Goodbye, brother." And with that, I stepped off of the skiff, pulled up my hood, and turned my back on the only life I had even known.
[spoiler]If you haven't realized yet, this character is an Eliksni. Also, critique and grammar are welcome :)
Edit 1: Few changes to make this flow better, as well as put this back where people can see. I'll give it another day, then I'll continue myself until someone notices. Even so, any advice from vets is welcome to this noob :)
Edit 2: this part is closed. If you wish to join, do so on the latest post.[/spoiler]
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(You made a character in the sign up sheet right?)
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[spoiler]Indeed. Would you like a link?[/spoiler]
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(Nah I was just wondering)
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[spoiler]Ok, that's fine :)[/spoiler]
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Edited by Hayleesi: 9/23/2015 11:12:25 AMA lone Huntress crouched lowly on a cliff, her armor blending well with the environment, making her hidden quite nicely. A sniper lay snug in her grasp, the girl making a few adjustments to see her target more clearly. "Exactly [i]why[/i] does Variks want this one?"her ghost said within her armor system. After the Queen had...succumbed to Orxy, Variks was the only suitable option to take over The reef. "Not sure, I just take orders and ask questions later."She replied, sighing in frustration. "He's out of sight line, thanks." The huntress strapped her rifle across her back and moved downward, trying to get a better angle on the Eliksni, her footfalls deadly quiet. [spoiler]your intro is great, but unsure of where you want to take it. Let's do some work shall we? [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Agreed, and that's kind of the reason I came here. Had a few ideas, but no definite endgame :P. However, before we continue, I have a suggestion: why not put it after the Queen's death, and make Variks the one to send for him? Just a thought, take it or discard it as you wish.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]it's edited (: [/spoiler]
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[spoiler]Then let the story begin :)[/spoiler] It has been several days since I left House Kings, and there have been few interruptions. It was quite peaceful, to be honest, and I enjoyed it while it lasted. I breathed in the simple calm of the land, and with a smile, I continued on my path, my wooded staff hitting the ground with a dull thud every few steps. I also made sure my company was still in tow. I still did not panic, though, simply noting it, and continued to walk for a little longer, before sitting down against a tree and sighing a bit. I took a moment to check my equipment once more: my pistol, knife, and sword, all painstakingly customized, we're still as they were last I checked them. My ether synthesizer, as well, was in perfect condition: a little invention of my own, made to help me in my travels. Finally satisfied that all was as it should be, I spoke aloud for the first time in days. "Will you not join me for a spot of rest, guardian?" [spoiler]Your move :) Also, please pardon any long-windedness or odd wording, first time I've done any sort of creative writing.[/spoiler]
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Edited by Hayleesi: 9/23/2015 11:47:43 AMShe trudged along at a safe distance, her sniper against her back now, a gold revolver held taunt instead. Emerald eyes examined him from the distance, noticing how calm he looked. It was almost serene. Suddenly the Eliksni stopped and settled against a tree, his voice breaking the silence that surrounded them. Surprise flickered across her face briefly before her calm demenor took over. The Huntress slipped from her cover, her green and earthy armor shader fading into a solid starch white and gold. She kept a distance from the fallen, just as a precaution. [spoiler]nah you're good, so far everything is great (: [/spoiler]
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With humor in my eyes, I gestured to our surroundings. "Will you not sit with me? I assure you, I intend no harm to one of the Light."
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[spoiler]I suppose I'll make it easier by doing first person as well lol[/spoiler] I hesitated for a moment, not being one to socialize with my targets, yet his aura read of anything but darkness. I couldn't sense it anyway. Sighing I walked over to a tree across from him and sat down, taking off my helmet. Red hair, partially shaved on one side spilled in freedom, covering my half scarred face, twirling a knife in my free hand.
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"I apologize for not being a very good host, as I don't have anything to offer other than conversation. Even so might you tell me why you've been tailing me these past few days?" I sent a inquisitive glance at her as I said it, never losing my humor. It was obvious by her stance and scars she was well-versed in battle - no doubt some of it against Eliksni - and so I did my best to put her at ease.
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"Unfortunately I'm not one for conversation either."I said, but after a moment of silence, I continued. "However I'm curious as to why Variks has any interest in you." Something about the fallen made me doubt Variks' words and I sheathed my knife and holstered my revolver, folding my hands neatly into my lap.
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My eyes widened in slight surprise, before I lowered my head, shaking it as I chuckled. "What would House Judgement want with a fool like me?"
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Edited by Hayleesi: 9/23/2015 1:05:59 PM"Something about you exiling yourself, he seemed...displeased. But it's not just House Judgment, Variks takes charge of The Reef"I said, brows furrowed. "My contractors usually don't give me much information..."I muttered to myself lowly, I should really enforce that into the deals later on.
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I looked to the sky for a moment, contemplating that. Then I sighed, and looked back at the guardian. "I've no idea why Variks has taken interest in me, but what he said is... partially right. I have exiled myself, yes - but not just from my House. I have discarded most all of the old ways, and have taken to this path to test myself. To prove that I am worthy of the blessings of the Traveler, as you call it." I chuckeled, then. "Perhaps he sees me as a candidate for Kell of Kells." I shook my head again to show just how absurd that was. Then, I looked her in the eye. "Enough about this fool, though. Would you care to tell me a bit about yourself? You have obviously been through great hardship and sorrow, more so than your occupation explains."
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I looked to the Fallen, nodding along at how absurd it would be. The last kell of Kells hadn't done so...successfully at the title, Variks disbanding the title until he sought a fallen fit for the position. That much I knew for I hadn't been under his hand that long. My eyes met his and I gave him a long stare as he threw the question at me. It was meaningless really, but I wasn't one to hold conversation as of late, seeing the last person I had fully talked to died to Orxy. "We all go through our crucible."I said simply, lifting my chin up slightly.
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I nodded at that, accepting that she wouldn't give me anything else. "I see. I'm apologize if I brought up harsh memories." Then, got up, and went to offer her a hand - but, of course, she was standing before I did. I smiled again at that. "In any case, I believe it is time we got going. I assume your ship is near to hand?"
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"Actually..."I paused and let out a dry chuckle. "I wasn't expecting confrontation for at least two miles more, so my ship is ahead of us." I was good at what I did, planning, hunting, so the early contact was....surprising and honestly took me off guard.
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Pleased that the woman had finally shown some amount of humor, I responded with a gleam in my eye. "Well, then, we had best get going, correct?" I picked up my staff and motioned for her to lead the way.
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I nodded slowly before falling into a comfortable pace with the Fallen, welcoming the comforting silence. He was odd, much like Variks in some ways, far from some of the Eliksni I encountered...those confrontations didn't end very well. I shivered at the thought. "What's your name?"I asked while, looking to the ground as we walked forward.
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The question brought the pain of memories to the surface, no doubt some of it showing. "Ah, that is... an interesting challenge. You recall how I stated my dismissal of the old ways, yes? Well, one part of that was discarding my old moniker, to make the separation complete. As such, I've yet to take a new one, but I'm sure one will come in due time." I tried to force a bit of humor back into myself, but only succeeding slightly.
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I could feel the change of atmosphere, hear the pain in his voice and felt a sense of guilt for asking. However I looked to him , the corner of my lip twisting up slightly. "We all go through our crucible."I repeated. "And we grow stronger from it, I'm sure one will come to you when the time is right."
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I nodded at that, grateful for the gesture and the lightening of the atmosphere. "Aye, that it will." [spoiler]I suggest we transition to the a Reef from here. Not much else to say, unless your Ghost wants to add his two cents.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler]her ghost is kinda mute ish, his character is odd after his revival[/spoiler] We had reached my ship in comfortable silence and in no time, thanks to the parts I tinkered with we reached the Reef. I hated coming here now, the Queens banners remained in place, as of the moment, but it only reminded me of time spent as her right hand. I snapped out of my revere and plastered a small smile onto my face before moving forward towards the throne room. The guards knew me well, dipping their heads in respect as we passed. If I had time perhaps I'd go see Petra, but for now I had to focus on Variks. So I led the fallen to him.
