Pretty good, I'd say have more effects, but I can see your reasoning as to why you don't have many in this vid. I'd be happy to look at a render or two of your upcoming montage, if you'd like. I'm definitely not the best editor, but I feel like I'm experienced enough to provide some useful feedback. PM me if you want to send me a render. As for my experience, I've been editing since spring 2012 (started with halo reach), and I'm working on a series of Destiny montages (first one's out, second one's coming later today): https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=peoDNY137KY