Not bad, completely different from the last one. My opinion though is something a bit more up beat. If you really want to go all the way. Put a lot of time into your editing. A few well edited videos are better than several decently edited ones. Try geting your gun shots to sync with the music (preferably drums) every now and then, not the whole vid though, that's a bit too much time spent (unless you want to do that). Dont be afraid to use multiple songs too, slower music with your sniper, and faster music with TLW. Also, when you slow down the footage, try slowing down the song as well, helps with effect. Sorry if my advice is a bit choppy, haven't made a montage since my laptop broke (a while ago).