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The beauteous Whatever World
Will make you oo --
But what Hyperborean anthem does it hold
Inside its faults and vault,
Oo the beauty of Whatever World --
Oo, the features you withhold.
The stars, sick crimson
Upon a lazy horizon,
Lain therein the marzipan striving --
To coo their studious perils.
Oo the natural Whatever World.
Alone do the wildebeests stalk
Some temporal tempests at dusk --
Carry with them discus
And embroider their souls with meniscus --
Oo the beasties of Whatever World.
Twilight ushers in the coldest sights and fright galore --
Never had it been so sure
That Time would ever taste the tentative tumult intertwined;
To whom does this belong?
With you do I make go oo
In the briskly fading shine of Whatever World.
Be for me the most obscene,
Unhinge those laws which we so bindingly contract --
Only to you does my oo react.
Trudge forward sincerely,
Commandeer the air and its sine,
The pleasure is mostly mine --
Do make haste at the arrival of discovery --
We cannot wait, too, oo --
Whatever World is out there
Waiting to be reeled
Across the fiery, brimstone plasma jaws
Of Whatever Galaxy
Which it sits in.
English
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Edited by Trentonimor: 1/13/2013 11:52:06 PMThe way you say "Ooo" makes me laugh. It doesn't help that you used a picture of Ms. Frizzle as the background. OT: Some of the rhyming sounded odd and forced, as well as some of the worlds. Overall it was very interesting, though.