If your gonna write a novel use more planets and characters. Make up your own planets if you want. Here is an Example: [spoiler]This part should be for a guardian scout recording ghost fragments. [i]These cabal. Their different. I looked one in the eyes but saved his ally instead of trying to kill me. The cabal in Mars are ruthless, sacrificing many of their allies to get the job done. The cabal on Neptune... They have less rivalry with each other than with a hunter and a knife.The vanguard want me to kill one of them to see what their weapons and armor are like. I honestly would if I could. The ghost scanned their armor. Their as strong as a phalanx shield itself. Tell Ikora that the attack on Neptune will be delayed or canceled. She hates you more cayde -Elite 48[/i][/spoiler]