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Head Like A Hole

[spoiler]Sitting on this too long. Not as happy with it as others but it'll do.[/spoiler] As the elevator doors slide open Balen and Winnow are met with the stench of rotting meat and loud music. Balen's private workshop is a sub basement of his tower, a large chamber of sterile white stone and checkered tile with high arched ceilings and bright florescent lights, of which only those along the walls are activated. Said walls are lined with various metallurgic stations and workbenches with shelves and drawers of tools thankfully untouched by Nil, who wasted no time making the rest of the place her own. Cloak and boots discarded to a nearby chair, Nil sits on the floor at the center of the workshop among a scattering of armor and metal. The tables shoved aside to make room for her mess are lined with cadavers, save one covered in loose papers and notebooks. Balen flips a pair of switches and fans roar to life along with the remaining lights hosting dangling effigies of bone and thread. "Sup," Winnow pinches her nose, "What's with the chandeliers?" "Ambiance," Nil replies, omitting their function as ward against spirits. "Doing some smithin?" As Winnow approaches she notices a bowl of blood beside Nil, whose sleeves are rolled up her rail thin arms revealing ancient scars. "Finger painting actually," Nil twists and wiggles bloodstained fingers with one hand while holding a helm with the other, a dim red glowing rune visible through the bottom. "I forged the armor," Balen states proudly, then leans and adds more quietly, "She hasn't left the workshop since the meeting." "The one like a week ag- ah!" As Winnow steps closer to Nil, electronic screeching comes through her ear piece. "Sorry, those things don't work near me," Nil rises, "I think it's related to my not having a reflection or showing up on camera?" "The stereo is controlled by a tablet, how did you-" Balen spots the tablet on a workbench near the wall with a severed hand beside it, standing on its fingers like a spider, wrist bobbing to the music, "- I see." "That's Jeff," Nil smiles, then calls to the hand, "Turn the music down please!" The hand flicks a finger and the volume lowers, "Thank you Jeff!" "Weird," Winnow looks up to Nil, "So you been down here a week? Where do you sleep?" "I'm not picky," brushing bangs from her eyes Nil leaves a red smear across her forehead. "I've a lot of work to do. Eddie's got an army; human soldiers, the Draug and Coven vampires, Shadow Elf witches, Dark Elf assassins... we got like twenty knights and a handful of Gorlok's slayers." "Plus my Ferals," Winnow turns her chin up proudly and Nil smiles politely, side eyeing Balen. "That's what she chose to call her people," Balen explains, walking to a nearby sink to wet a rag, "They had no Scion, so i've written a contract naming her Scion-Elect of the 'Feral Brood,' giving her authority over her people and recognizing them as our kin." "He also said it'll keep you from killing me," Winnow smirks and Balen flinches as Nil snatches the rag. "Only after I sign it in blood to give it that Fey Oomph," Nil smirks back, giving Winnow's nose a bloody boop before wiping her hands off. "That won't be necessary, it was written into older contracts to-" Balen points to his forehead and Nil wipes her own clean, "- details aside, it's done. So assuming even a quarter of them still live that's several dozen guerrilla fighters who know these streets better than anyone." "And your butler here promised free drinks and lodging," Winnow punches Balen's shoulder and his jaw clenches, "so it shouldn't be hard to round em up!" "Cool beans," Nil never blinks, "Is that all or can I get back to it?" "One more thing," reaching into her pocket Winnow produces a gleaming scarlet card, "My old boss wants to meet with you,  alone." The gold print upon it reads 'Nero's Lamp' along with an address that magically changes before their eyes. "You've been working for the Djinn?" Taking the card, Balen examines it, "How much have you told him?" "Pretty much everything," Winnow shrugs, "Told him about you, Gorlok, the baddies, and the Red Queen here, but this was my last job for him!" Their conversation is drowned out by a swarm of buzzing flies in Nil's ears. She stares at one of the bone chandeliers, failing to come up with a mobile version and having a not so mild panic attack at the thought of leaving. "Why not meet here?" She finally squeaks, interrupting whatever argument the two were having. "He can't leave his club," in a blur of motion Winnow swipes the card again, "Look, he kept me and mine fed so long as we kept him fed with juicy gossip. He said he wants to help us. Give him a chance!" Taking a step beyond the influence of her wards Nil waits a moment. When nothing happens she turns back with a forced smile, hand extended, "I'll pay him a vist. What's the worst that could happen?" "Perhaps we could use his assistance," a pouty Balen summons the elevator,  "but choose your words carefully around him kiddo." Nil takes the card and a subtle enchantment activates. A flood of memories flow into her mind having previously been sealed away, flashes of images and faces, faint conversations within a red room. One memory stands out, Nil's own voice answering a question: "[i]Balen would try to stop me.[/i]"

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  • The trio stand in silence as the elevator rises, Balen occasionally trying to catch Nil's gaze and her in turn avoiding it. "You sure you're up for this kid?" Reaching up he rests a hand on her back and Nil flinches away with a nod. "I'm fine, thanks." As the doors slide open Nil departs while he and Winnow continue a discussion she does not hear. Awaiting her by the tower entrace is Ann wearing tattered rags, torso run through with several swords. "Remove the wards at once." Ignoring her, Nil exits the tower and marches past the shriveled husk of Autumn, who rasps, "Please release me I'm tired." "Did Balen convince you to shut us out?" Melinoa growls, half charred and leaving a trail of smoke in her wake, "You can't trust him, fool." "You look terrible, darling" Winter's throat has been slit, but she snears all the same, "Is this really what you're wearing to the Lord's Grand Ball?" "It's not too late to flee," water flows from a soaked Scylla's mouth and nostrils, "What say we hop on a ship and forget about all of this, aye?" Nil pauses, raising a brow, "How does a Sea Elf drown?" Behind the smiling pirate a door comes into focus with a lamp carved upon it. Nil knocks and- A flash of light, a brief and sudden tone, a monster headache, then darkness. Nil hears the ocean, and when she opens her eyes she sees it too. Standing upon the docks she grips her head and tries to recall details of the meeting. Nero the Djinn, Lord of Desire within the Underworld Court. Tall and statuesque with skin like polished bronze and twin suns for eyes, sat behind his desk in a red room overlooking his nightclub. And someone else, behind Nil. Light, screech, pain. "Look what you've done to yourself," the mummified corpse of Autumn rasps, then walks off the edge of the docks. There is no splash. Nil looks up, struggling to focus on the moon through the surface of the water and panic sets in. She flails about as she sinks deeper, gasping for air despite only breathing for the aesthetic. Silt rises as she strikes the bottom and through it Scylla reaches out, her normally dark eyes impossibly bright. "Get off the road freak!" A car blurs past, horn blaring, followed by another. Standing in the center of a busy city street, Nil feels like she's being torn in half. Melinoa has one arm pulling away from Ann gripping the other. Flash, noise, ouch, fear. She falls back in her chair and Nero rises. He asks Nil what's wrong and his voice sounds sincere, but she flees. Now she stands upon the side of Balen's tower a few stories up. Taking a seat, she buries her face in her hands and screams, but all that comes out is sea water. ~ ~ ~ The elevator doors slide open and Winnow steps out to find Nil pacing in the dark. "Stay out of my head," Winnow shouts, "If you need me just have Jeff send a text." "You! Approach," Nil dips her fingers into a bowl of blood then begins weaving threads of red light while quietly singing in a dead variant of Elvish. Winnow cautiously steps forward and Nil suddenly reaches out, placing a hand on her shoulder and pressing a thumb against her chest. After a brief moment of searing pain Winnow stumbles back, gun aimed with one hand as the other clutches the burn. "The hell was that," her back hits the wall, "What did you do?" "Carved a rune into your sternum to protect you from scrying," Nil points to a ribcage on a nearby table, alongside a wad of black cloth that Winnow identifies as her shirt, and with horror realizes the darkness within Nil's robes is an open chest cavity. "I did the same to my own but I felt you would object if I removing yours beforehand." "Yeah I'm pretty sure that's not supposed to come out, so again, the hell?" "I'd planned to put it back but heard you coming." Turning away Winnow hears and smells cooking meat as Nil spins around with a small metal box between her burning hands. Nil drops it and with a push from her boot the box slides towards Winnow, who catches it with her own. "I've placed them upon the box aswell," Nil returns to pacing, fidgiting burnt and bloodstained fingers, "I need you to hide it somewhere." Wearily Winnow leans down and undoes the latches revealing a heart and a metal spike. "Once more, with feeling, what the hell?!" "There is time I cannot account for," Nil rubs her temples, speaking rapidly, "I took the card and everything after is like trying to recall an old dream I fear the Nowhere still has its claws in me so if I go Big Bad again drive that cold-iron stake through my heart do you hear that buzzing?" "Wha- no?" Winnow seals the chest once more and reaches for the elevator button on the wall, "You want me to kill you?" "The stake would only place me in torpor." "Should I get Balen?" "Balen would try to stop-" Nil's eyes narrow as they meet Winnow's for the first time, sending a chill up her spine, "Have we had this conversation before?" "Not that I recall!" Picking the chest up Winnow steps into the elevator and enters the new code Balen gave her, "I'll get it done if you get some sleep, deal?" With a manic chuckle the red lights of Nil's eyes turn back to her morbid, lightless workshop as the doors slide closed.

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    • Man, now I have 3 big posts I need to read. >.<

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      • Very nice for the most part. I loved the trippy dream sequence, and you did a good job with the timeskip from the last part. I do agree that this one wasn't [i]quite[/i] as good as the previous ones, but I think that's just because Nil spent too much time underneath her wards, keeping the other Nils from chiming in. I like the other Nils. The one thing I'm a bit confuzzled on--and I'm pretty sure this was intentional, but I don't think this time worked as well as before--is what happened after the dream sequence. One moment they were heading up to Nero's the second Winnow's stepping out of an elevator. I had to double back and read this a few times to actually figure out what was going on. As I said, I'm sure the sudden shift was intentional, especially with Nil being in such a panic, but I think this one could've used a little bit more of a transition, because the scene right after is pretty trippy in its own right. Not a lot, granted, just something like Winnow riding up the elevator, or Nil pacing in the dark a bit before Winnow steps out. Something to let us know where we are.

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        • Bamp!!

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          • Black as your soul. I’d rather live than give NIL control.

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              i need a head in the hole like i need a hole in the head in the hole

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