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A Return to the Earth Below

"[i]Wake up.[/i]" Looking around Nil finds the undercroft as empty as she'd left it. She sits against a large stone coffin at the center, sickly pale and thin with deep bags beneath ruby eyes of which the whites have turned oily dark. The only corpse left beneath the abandoned Temple of Bernthal. As always, Nil is draped in black from head toe; boots laced to the knee over tight fit trousers, a blouse with web-like patterns of lace around the neck and shoulders, all wrapped within a long cloak with a mane of raven feathers. Her messy hair, also black, is recently sheared unevenly short, and several charms of small bone dangle from her Elven ears. Leaning her head back, Nil closes her eyes again- "We need to discuss Lord Balen." -then opens them to see a reflection. An angry one. Ann's pink eyes glare through a curtain of snow white hair. Ignoring her, Nil rises and turns to retrieve the pointed hat from the lid behind her. "You need to feed," Autumn, a more accurate reflection with longer hair and tattered robes, looks up sadly beside the hat, and Nil turns to leave. She didn't want the hat anyway. It's so last millennia. "He was an uncle to us," Ann is unrelenting. "Go be dead elsewhere," Nil finally responds, which was a mistake. "He allied with our enemies," Melinoa growls, hulking frame leaning against a column that definitely wouldn't hold her weight if she were real. "Do we know that for certain?" The pirate Scylla beside her, blue green scales glimmering in the dim candle light. "All we saw was a handshake," Winter, bored, checks her nails sat opposite the hat from Autumn, who adds helpfully, "You're mad." "[i]Kill them all![/i]" The dark eyed creature chuckles from the ceiling above. The cacophony bicker as Nil stands alone, ears ringing, then with a quick slash of her crystalline blade she decapitates Ann. "[i]Yes![/i]" The creature laughs, "[i]Kill them![/i]" Nil turns to the next. "[i]Kill them![/i]" And the next. "[i][b]Kill him![/b][/i]" And then her blade is a hairs width from the nose of Lord Balen. Nil's eyes dart around her new surroundings, a meeting room within a tall glass tower looking out to the night sky and lights of the city far below. Several figures in suits have risen from their chairs, glaring as she stands on the table over the Dwarven man sat at its head. Balen also wears a suit, pressed tight against broad shoulders. His auburn hair and beard are thick but neat and his eyes are the same gold as the rings upon his fingers as he looks up to Nil, solemnly. "Leave us," he commands, and the thralls silently obey, then he pinches the blade and examines it. "I remember the day I presented this sword to your father. I was honored to have worked with such material and proud to call him my friend." Balen meets Nil's glare, "Why are you trying to kill me with it?" "Thought the old pact null," Nil smirks awkwardly, "Since you're all chummy with Eddie now." "Draug? Child, I am a businessman," the child bit stung, but he has a few centuries on her so fair, "I sold him arms and supplies several years ago, but when he offered a seat on his council I declined." "And I'm to take your word for it? The word of an opportunist?" Nil snarls, "You didn't join my father, your friend, in the war either. You weren't there when he died. You only crawled out of the shadows after I'd taken everything back. When there was something to gain from it." Balen seemed genuinely hurt by Nil's words, which was often the point of them, but this hurt her too. "We passed eachother on the mountain that day, do you remember?" Balen sighs, "The last time we saw each other alive." The memory hurt. Nil wasn't to leave the mansion for fear of the enemy, but there was a girl in the village below. The road was slim and she'd tried to hide within a crevice, but Balen saw her and smiled putting a finger to his lips. A few hours later her father lay dead in the street as the village burned. "It wasn't his fault," Ann pleads, and Autumn adds, "It was yours." Melinoa protests and Scylla contests and Winter just laughs while the creature insists, "[i]Kill him![/i]" "[b][i]Shut up![/b][/i]" Nil snaps, and Balen's face goes hard as stone once more. "I came to your father to offer all my House had, despite what it would cost us, but he refused my offer Annie." The blade is at his throat again before she realizes, the creature growls through her and a drop of dark ichor falls to the table between them. "You still in there, girl?" Unfazed, he leans into it, "Or is this monster all that's left?" For a moment Nil lingers, then pulls away and drops to her knees. "Gil'ne mir din'en," queit words in a dead tongue, "Ir ibelis." Balen sighs with relief, "I understood 'I'm sorry' and that's good enough for-" An arriving elevator down the hall draws his attention and Balen jumps up to pull her to the ground.

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  • Bullets fly past and through Balen as he drops beside her, reaching under the table for a short shotgun. Nil pulls him to the side of the doors to check his wounds, but he grabs her hand. "Save your magics for them!" Peaking around the corner Nil sees a group of masked, slender figures in dark leathers armed with an assortment of weapons, and she rises sword in hand. "Tight space for your two hander," Balen picks a bullet out of his chest and examines it, "Enchanted, radiant energy, clever Drow." "Dark Elves? Eddie sent his friends then." "Dealt with them before, didn't know they were with him now," He looks up with eyes gone dark as her own, "Go left, I'll cover from the right." "Monster time," Nil yanks a bone charm from her ear and crushes it in hand. As Balen peaks to shoot she slides out blowing the dust into the long hall and takes cover opposite him. "That pixie dust the best you got?" Balen frowns, reloading. Footfalls approach and then cries of pain fill the hall as the Drow are assaulted by skeletal arms reaching out from the surfaces around them. "It's definitely up there." "They're not dead." Balen, unimpressed, returns fire. "So impatient!" Nil rushes the first wounded Drow and impales them with her sword then twists it to slash at the next. They block with two shorter blades and step closer, denying her space to properly swing. Rude to assume that would save them. Nil blocks a few strikes, takes a few others, then seizes an opportunity to reach out and grab their throat, boiling the blood within their body. The Drow screams and she shoves him out the hall. As he stumbles into the lobby the others open fire. A few rounds strike Nil before she has a chance to conjure a shield of membrane from the gore. Then the inflicted Drow explodes in a burst of blue-green flame that consumes the lobby. Dropping into a dark meeting room, to the left as ordered, Nil wills her flesh to push out the burning bullets, thankful she doesn't bleed anymore because the floors are quite nice. Hearing heavy boots on the otherside of the wall she readies herself, aims the blade, listens, strikes, and misses. The Drow retaliates with a shotgun blast through the wall that knocks Nil on her back. Through the door she sees a pool of blood from one of the fallen and she pulls it towards her fingers in thin ribbons. As the last Drow enters they take aim and with a flick of her wrist the ribbons crack like a whip, rising up and around the Drow to cut them pieces. As Nil pulls herself to her feet she hears Elvish from the Drow's radio ordering a retreat, but as she reaches for it the signal becomes static. Shambling past Balen who has stood to drink from a flask. "We need to have a longer conversation, Annie." "Do NOT call me that again," Nil marches past, metal falling from her gut, then turns to add, "I'll swing by later, sorry." With a blink she's outside, standing upon the window in a mockery of gravity. A van pulls out of an alley and Nil sprints across the building then leaps into the night air, turning midair and crosses her arms over her chest, cursing herself for leaving the blade in the wall. Ann is falling with her, smiling, then she reaches out to Nil's throat and her pink eyes go black. "[b][i]YOU SHOULD HAVE KILLED HIM![/b][/i]" Impact, broken steel, flying glass, screeching tires, the world is spinning. Nil rises from the concrete, bones snapping sickeningly back into place, wounds mending themselves, then shambles like a zombie towards the van while mentally assessing herself. Body: fabulous, she pulls a bit of metal from her shoulder. Feathered cloak: plucked, it was a bit much anyway. Sword: Balen should keep it, a shard of glass from her head. Mind: in the shitter, might need help with that. A single Drow crawls out of the flipped wreckage, maskless she's a mess of pale blue skin and white hair both stained as red as her wild, fearful eyes. Kinda looks like Winter. She goes for a gun but Nil tosses another bit of bone at her and it expands, wrapping around her torso to bind her arms, forcing her to the ground with its weight. Nil lifts the Drow by her throat. "Dead or alive, you're gonna tell me-" she manages to rasp before the van explodes. With another blink they are lying upon the cold stone floor of the undercroft, only slightly crispy. The Drow falls unconscious first, then Nil joins her. ~~~ "[i]Wake up.[/i]" Then Nil rises yet again. The Drow is dead, she can tell not by the body, but by the wet mess on her chin. No sense whinging over spilt blood, Nil qucikly reaches for her satchel and the materials to conjure their spirit, but discovers them already set up. She says the words and lights the candles but nothing happens. "I know something you don't know." Nil looks up and finds herself surrounded by the cacophony, all but one, all staring past her to the coffin. Autumn smiles beneath that damned hat.

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    • How rood of the Drow to interrupt the heart-to-heart. Seriously, if you're going to ambush and assassinate somebody, at least let them let out the touchy-feelies.

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      • The dialogue & fight scenes were both great, and had me hooked, but I will admit I was a bit confuzzled where they were most of the time. Granted, I only woke up an hour ago, so I may still be drowsy. I know they were walking as they talked, and that the fight took place as they pushed forwards, but I never really had a good sense of what the rooms looked like in either case, so that could use some work. That’s the only thing that stuck out as needing work, though. I really enjoyed the various aspects of Nil hanging around her. I know they were intended as hallucinations or something similar, but it reminded me of Ajna from Indivisible, who literally carries actual people around in her head. It’s a really charming dynamic, because the protag just takes all their allies with them, so they can comment on literally anything that happens, having conversations about things like, for instance, the van exploding without actually needing to follow. I dig it.

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        • I love how the drow are using guns and radios. All so very Offtopic sounding. Despite the many magic-users and fantasy characters in their place there sure seems to be a lot of guns. I find that was a fun addition along with the hat.

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          • Bump for later?

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            • Hah Nil has hallucinations, wack. [spoiler]Seriuosly, this is incredibly well written. Good job.[/spoiler]

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